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Rei Otakufic - Foxboy - 07-30-2006
Sorry, Epsilon, it's lost in the muddle of Fanfic.net, IIRC... it's about 4 years or more old, because it was part of the inspiration for IWATDP...
''We don't just borrow words; on occasion, English has pursued other languages down alleyways to beat
them unconscious and rifle their pockets for new vocabulary.''
-- James Nicoll
Re: hmm - Bob Schroeck - 07-30-2006
Quote:This sounds a whole lot like a fic I used to have a copy of somewhere -- except for being led around by the Asuka -- and it wasn't an abandoned beginning, it was a short that had an ending that was a weird blend of "feel good" and ominous "what now?"
Another one, that I saw the start of, and it was abandoned: Rei Ayanami finds herself at an anime convention after self-destructing her EVA against Armisael. She wins a costume contest for her plug suit, and is led around by an Asuka cosplayer...
Found it in my archives -- for once I found something quickly -- it's Richard Lawson's "Rei II's Excellent Adventure", posted to the FFML in 1998:
From: "Richard Lawson"
To:
Subject: [FFML] [EVA][spamfic] Rei II's Excellent Adventure
Date: Wed, 23 Sep 1998 13:25:07 -0500
What the heck. Someone mentioned this on the FFML and the idea's been
echoing in my brain for far too long. Let's give it a try and see what
happens.It was *inside* her.
She felt it like liquid fire flowing through her veins. It was going to eat
her from the inside, and when it did, it would have Unit-00 as well. And
then it would win.
If there was no other point to her existence, she still knew that she could
not lose. Defeating the Angels was her only reason for living. Almost her
only reason.
Really, the decision was easy. There would be another after her.
She struggled to her feet, the liquid making her motions slow and precise.
The pain was intense, it fired along her nerves like a thing alive. It
*was* alive, and knew what she was going to do, and did its best to stop
her. But pain was nothing to her, nothing could compare to the forced
injection of memory and purpose, of the ties that bound her to a man she had
no choice but to acquiesce to, life itself was empty pain and nothing the
Angel could do could compare to that.
She gripped the handle, turned it, activated it.
And the explosion, during which the Angel tried to get away. And something,
something inside of her she wasn't aware of, something that was not the
Angel but very like it, something held on to the Angel, the roles reversed
now, she preventing escape instead of fighting off invasion. And in the
confusion of death and terror and energy, something shifted and she felt the
Angel slip away from her grasp into chaos. The chaos claimed her, too, and
her mind and body became randomized, flew apart......and came back together.
She drew one breath. Two. Air, it was real air she was breathing, not
liquid. Her heart was beating and her body was empty of anything other than
herself. She took a few precious seconds reveling in her solitude.
Discipline, literally ingrained into her soul, forced her to assess the
situation. She slowly focused on the sky, which appeared to be made of
brown wooden panels. The ground was smooth, flat, and slightly padded.
This was not a part of Tokyo 3 she was familiar with. She immediately
chastised herself; no reason to assume she was in Tokyo 3 at all.
With no small amount of effort, she sat up.
A long hallway, lined with doors. Each door sequentially numbered.
Utilitarian decor.
She thought on this for a while, then stood up. She walked slowly down the
hallway towards an open area at the end.
A door opened as she passed it. She turned and examined the man that walked
through. Tall, Western, scruffly shaven, slightly built. Wearing a blonde
wig tied in two long ponytails. His legs underneath the elaborate fuku were
unshaven.
He grinned as they looked at each other. "Neat costume."
She looked inside her mind to see if she could speak English and found that
she could do so. "Where am I? Was the Angel destroyed?"
He laughed. "Excuse me, I want to go see the fanfic panel." He walked
briskly by her and down the hallway.
Her brow furrowed slightly. She reprocessed his response but was unable tom
ake sense out of it. Maybe she didn't know the language as well as she had
thought.She followed him from a distance. He entered the open area, which turned
out to be a hotel lobby. He made his way down another corridor and into
another open area.
She stopped there to look around. This appeared to be a foyer of some sort,
filled with people. It was lined with tables, behind which sat other
people. The tables were covered with various things, from what looked like
manga to flyers to artwork. One table, behind which was a large sign
reading "Registration", had lots of people lined up at it.
The people were the oddest thing. While most were dressed in typical
American casual, some were dressed in what could only be elaborate costumes.
Costumes similar to the man in the hallway's were prevalent. There seemed
to be themes - she could look at one costume, and then at another, and judge
them to represent the same character. She didn't recognize any of them,
however.
A scream made her and other people look towards the center of the room. A
woman who looked to be in her thirties and dressed in some kind of flowing
robes and unusual markings on her forehead came charging towards her. She
took a cautious step backwards, but the robed woman came up and clasped her
hands."Your outfit is *wonderful*!" The robed woman grinned, then turned and
shouted over her shoulder. "Look, it's Rei!"
She blinked. How'd they know her name?
A man wearing a red shirt, black pants, and a black wig with a pigtail came
up. "Wow!" He reached over to poke Rei's cheek. "How'd you get your skin
so white?"
Rei looked up at him. "My skin has only been exposed to sunlight for a few
days."
Much as the man in the hallway had, he laughed. "You even *sound* right."
Another woman, this one only slightly older than Rei and wielding an
oversized spatula, called out, "Look at her eyes! They're *red*!
"An appreciative murmur passed through the growing crowd. Rei looked around,
feeling... odd. While at times she had been the center of attention, such
attention had been cold, clinical, and sometimes resentful. Never had so
many people... *admired* her.
One man wearing an odd cap came up to her. "Say, can I have my picture
taken with you?"
Rei blinked slowly. "With me?"
He handed his camera to another person standing nearby, then put her arm
around her shoulder in a rather familiar fashion. She had no idea how to
react, so just stared blankly at the camera as it flashed.
The man with the cap shook her hand. "Are you going to be in the cosplay?
"Cosplay. She had heard of those. "I... that was not my intention."
"Oh, you gotta enter." He herded her towards the registration table, and
people cleared out of the way for him. "Sign her up!" he called as he
approached.
The woman behind the desk also smiled. "That's wonderful, dear. What's
your name?"
"Um..." The confusion in her head was growing. "Ayanami Rei."
"Of course." The woman's smile grew wider as she filled in a form. "Okay.
Be at the ballroom at six."
"Um... I... I have to find the Angel."
The capped man grabbed her shoulders again. "I'll help! I've got to make
an appearance at our booth. Come with me and together we'll find the Lance
together!"The crowd of people nearby laughed. Rei gawked at them, absolutely at a
loss. She allowed herself to be pulled along, and almost began hoping that
soon Gendo would wake her up and tell her that it was time for school.
Instead, she found herself being pulled deeper into the crowd and chaos.
***
"And Best in Show goes to - Rei Ayanami!"
Rei walked back onto the stage, still in a daze. As before, all she had to
do was walk on and the crowd went nuts. They were cheering and smiling and
seemed to really enjoy looking at her.
The man in the cap, who turned out to be one of the judges, presented her
with some awards. One turned out to be a small figurine of Unit-00. She
frowned at the package, which prominently featured her picture on it. It
was all so confusing.
The capped man shook her hand and leaned close to her so that she could hear
him over the noise of the crowd. "Great costume, really. And you've always
stayed so much in character. You did a wonderful job."
She blinked at him again. Then she looked out into the crowd, which was now
on its feet. Dozens - hundreds? - of people cheering her. Cheering *her*.
She was no one, an automaton with clearly defined roles and no motivation to
do anything outside her programming. A replaceable part that no one could
ever afford to like. Especially, she could never afford to like herself.
But these people did. More cameras were flashing, and they were still
applauding, and everyone had treated her respect and affection. In thew
orld that was composed of a few rooms inside a hotel, people liked her.
*Liked* her. Wanted nothing more from her than her presence. Didn't want
her for what she could do for them, but wanted her because she *was*.
And suddenly there was more inside her than just her. These other people
had somehow slipped themselves inside, but it wasn't an invasion, it was
company, it was a connection that made her feel warm and comfortable. And
she loved it.
She smiled, and the crowd roared in response.
~*~
AUTHOR'S NOTE: Okay, it didn't turn out as well as I'd hoped. I couldn't
get the contrast quite right. Ah well, it was a fairly lame idea anyway.
^_^
You could go places with this, if you were of a mind. Rei's little universe
will come crashing down a bit when the con ends. After all, she has no
money and no real identity. You could turn this into a neat little story of
Rei II adjusting to "normal" life outside the clutches of NERV. But it
wouldn't be very much closely related to Evangelion at all. Unless that
Angel also made it to our world, and began looking for Adam. Hmm....
Anyway, if I were to write a serious Eva fic, it would be on a different
topic than this. But heck, I wanted to get this out of my system. I enjoy
playing little "what-if" games like this, toying with ideas and seeing where
they take me. Once in a while, they become full-blown fics, such as one
Sebastian Weinberg and I are working on together. This one didn't -
although anyone who wanted to take this and go someplace with it is
certainly free to do so. I don't expect anyone shall, however. [Image: smile.gif]
-Richard
-- Bob
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Re: 284 is enough AGAIN! NEW NEW new fic reccomendation thre - Bob Schroeck - 07-30-2006
Quote:That sounds a whole lot like it's part of the Xanadu project -- much of which you can find on Ed Becerra's site. It's not one that's familiar to me, though.
I'm not certain if it counts but I do remember reading a fanfic wherein a pair of otaku cosplay as Ranma and Shampoo to go to a party or con or something, then a magic spell at the con turns them into the characters.
-- Bob
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hmm - Foxboy - 07-31-2006
That fic was the one I remembered. Don't know where the Asuka cosplayer in my memory came from though...
''We don't just borrow words; on occasion, English has pursued other languages down alleyways to beat
them unconscious and rifle their pockets for new vocabulary.''
-- James Nicoll
Re: hmm - Bob Schroeck - 07-31-2006
Glad to be of service! As I see by rereading the note at the end, I was a bit off, in that Lawson clearly thought this could be the beginning of a longer fic, but then again, he never intended to take it farther than this.
-- Bob
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Something different - Loki Laufeyjarson - 07-31-2006
This JLA tale from the author Adrian Tullberg is definetly worth a read. I think his work has been recommended here before, but I have to warn you that this is different. And I don't mean Deadpool as the DADA-teacher different or The Dalek Vs. Pokemon different. For one thing this one is longer and more serious and for another it is just different.
Probationary Member (Complete, 1 Chapter, 16290 words)
www.fanfiction.net/s/3061070/1/
And if you are in the mood for something funny after that check out The Batman Protocols, The Worst Case Scenario and some of his other stories.
Re: Probationary Member - jpub - 07-31-2006
Powerful work. Thought provoking, actually.
It's the kind of work that ticks me off in a way - he started with his usual farcical romp, and then turned it into something downright grim near the end.
But still, a work well worth reading.
--
Christopher Angel, aka JPublic
The Works of Christopher Angel
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Re: Probationary Member - Bob Schroeck - 07-31-2006
I just opened it and got to the eary big reveal, and now I'm looking forward to where this goes...
(Later)
Damn. I see what you meant, Chris, but yeah, that's a hell of a story.
-- Bob
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Re: 284 is enough AGAIN! NEW NEW new fic reccomendation thre - Cobalt Greywalker - 07-31-2006
The 'transformed into Ranma and Shampoo' fic is called "A One-Half Semester" by Ran Dandel.
The Below link is on www.fictionmania.com. This is a TG site is is VERY MUCH *NSFW*.
OK... Link.
Re: 284 is enough AGAIN! NEW NEW new fic reccomendation thre - Bob Schroeck - 08-01-2006
And Fictionmaria seems to be down or swamped or something now...
-- Bob
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...The President is on the line
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Re: Probationary Member - Sweno - 08-01-2006
Re: Probationary Member
Wow, just wow. That is a full pendulum swing from quirky romp, to gritty horror story. And very well done.
Now I have to go read some of his other stuff.-Terry
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"Luge strategy? Lie flat and try not to die." - Carmen Boyle (Olympic Luge Gold Medal winner - 1996)
Mary Sue's theme music
-Terry
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"so listen up boy, or pornography starring your mother will be the second worst thing to happen to you today"
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Re: Probationary Member - WengFook - 08-01-2006
I think I liked it better when it was a quirky romp... I mean I like the story and all but... the ending, well it simply was... somewhere I didn't want to particularly visit often. :S_______________________________
We are the swords in the darkness, the watchers on the walls. The fire that burns against the cold, the light that brings the dawn. The horn that wakes the sleepers. The shield that guards the realms of men. -The Brothers Black
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Take Your Candle, Go Light Your World.
Re: Probationary Member - Bob Schroeck - 08-01-2006
It would be nice if there were an AU version that stayed quirky romp all the way to the end, whatever that end might be...
-- Bob
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Re: Probationary Member - jpub - 08-01-2006
You know, my main problem with Tullberg is that he comes up with all these great concepts, and goes nowhere.
Like Evolution, a fic where Kyle Rainer dies in a standard street crime, and in his will asks Batman to take up the Green Lantern mantle.
Batman, with a Power Ring. The mind boggles.
I'd love to see a story from that.--
Christopher Angel, aka JPublic
The Works of Christopher Angel
Re: Probationary Member - Loki Laufeyjarson - 08-01-2006
Quote:An AU where the main-charcter moves on to lead her own team since she was trained by Batman as predicted in the story? I admit that my imagination provided a brief flash of a team of superpowered adult entertainment workers, exotic dancers and assorted professionals when I read that line....
It would be nice if there were an AU version that stayed quirky romp all the way to the end, whatever that end might be...
I don't know if the author changed his mind halfway through or if he had that ending in mind all along, but it was necessary to have some sort of closure to make it work. I think that despite all the fun parts the sort of ending that actually came was sort of inevitable, I just never expected it to be quite this harsh.
Re: Probationary Member - Epsilon - 08-01-2006
Quote:In other words, something that would be visually indistinguisable from your standard superhero team. ^_^
An AU where the main-charcter moves on to lead her own team since she was trained by Batman as predicted in the story? I admit that my imagination provided a brief flash of a team of superpowered adult entertainment workers, exotic dancers and assorted professionals when I read that line....
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Epsilon
Ah, spandex, where would teenage geeks be without it?
Re: Probationary Member - Rieverre - 08-01-2006
Quirky romp? Heh. If my mind ever goes enough I'll go do something like that with an offshot of Post's TBE-verse. Hell, there's even a spread of characters to do it with, and the foot in the door I got with Discord couldn't hurt.
After all, especially his version of DC needs some lightening up.
-Griever
When tact is required, use brute force. When force is required, use greater force.
When the greatest force is required, use your head. Surprise is everything. - The Book of Cataclysm
Re: Probationary Member - Ebony - 08-01-2006
Quote:Um, it's been done. By DC. Batman Elseworlds: In Darkest Night. It's not bad, but Harvey Dent and Selina Kyle get a raw deal.Ebony the Black Dragon
Batman, with a Power Ring. The mind boggles.
Senior Editor, Living Room Games
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http://ebony14.livejournal.com
"Good night, and may the Good Lord take a Viking to you."
Re: Probationary Member - Bob Schroeck - 08-02-2006
Quote:Now there's a man who'll take the Lantern oath at its face value. He Just Won't Stop.
Batman, with a Power Ring. The mind boggles.
-- Bob
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Wish Granted - hmelton - 08-02-2006
Here is a short 3 chapter crossover of SG1 and BtVS.
It uses clone O'Neil and Xander and isn't to bad.
www.tthfanfic.org/Story-9...ranted.htm
howard melton
Re: Probationary Member - Herr Bad Moon - 08-02-2006
Quote:It's worth a read just for the scene where he tells the Gaurdians of Oa to collectively piss off because he's The Motherfucking Batman.---------------
Um, it's been done. By DC. Batman Elseworlds: In Darkest Night. It's not bad, but Harvey Dent and Selina Kyle get a raw deal.
-Jon
Being the Mariner hitting coach is like being the Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher at Hogwarts.
-Poster on USSMariner.com
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Jon
"And that must have caused my dad's brain to break in half, replaced by a purely mechanical engine of revenge!"
blah - jpub - 08-02-2006
Bats as GL:
I'll have to see if I can find some of the Elseworlds compilations in my comic shop.
Hmm. You know, it occurs to me I'm a DC nut. I'm not nearly as into Marvel.
In other news:
www.fanfiction.net/u/687710/
Redbyrd's story "Origins" is a retelling of the genesis of the Titans.
Kicks. Ass.--
Christopher Angel, aka JPublic
The Works of Christopher Angel
Re: blah - Florin - 08-04-2006
That is a pretty sweet story, but his grasp on grammer, specifically tense shifting, seems to be getting worse as it goes on (up to chapter 9 so far) and it's starting to drive me nuts.--
Instead of playing the role of a super hero, one degenerates into a strange bum luring villains to their doom in a trash dumpster. -Statesman
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If you become a monster to put down a monster you've still got a monster running around at the end of the day and have as such not really solved the whole monster problem at all.
Re: blah - Acyl - 08-04-2006
Quote:If I understand correctly, the Redbyrd stuff is actually a collaboration between two writers (it's more clearly spelled out in Neoinean's profile). That might explain the uneven prose quality in some sections, or it might be bad editing in melding bits. I dunno.
That is a pretty sweet story, but his grasp on grammer, specifically tense shifting, seems to be getting worse as it goes on (up to chapter 9 so far) and it's starting to drive me nuts.
-- Acyl
New Cat Tales: - Bob Schroeck - 08-04-2006
Chris Dee has posted the first chapter of a fic entitled Blueprints.
-- Bob
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