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Dead Bang chpt 8 snippet - Dragonflight - 09-12-2011 Just testing the water to see what people think. The next chapter is halfway done. I really wanted to do a classic Knight Saber raid on a facility in this chapter, but I may pass until the next one. I've just got too much ground to cover here. A teaser to test the water... Quote:Yoshida took a deep breath to steady himself, and gestured at the image--- Those who fear the darkness have never seen what the light can do. - CattyNebulart - 09-12-2011 Interesting so now that Yoshida knows, can he be made to forget? or just prevented from thinking of ways to deactivate it? Anyway I hope to see more soon. E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?" B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell." - Proginoskes - 09-16-2011 I'm assuming "Silver" is the fusion-nanite boomer Yoshida, and I find it interesting that he seems to be uninfected by Leon-B. I forsee Silver installing in his cohorts a system to make Leon-B trigger an immune response. - Dragonflight - 10-03-2011 Yeah, it's better explained in the actual chapter, since this is a snippet from a conversation in progress. But this "Silver" is a copy of Silver Yoshida that Yoshida animates to figure out how he failed. The idea being that two heads are better than one. What Silver *finds*, of course, is more than Yoshida bargained for. --- Those who fear the darkness have never seen what the light can do. - Disruptor - 10-06-2011 Or Baty and Ai bargained for. Since Syllia also has a copy of that corrupt Leon-A virus courtesy of Mackie ripping the original Silver Yoshida's head off, Baty and Ai's plans are going to go up in smoke. And now, a pissed off enhanced Yoshida will be taking center stage and causing all kinds of havoc. -------------------- Tom Mathews aka Disruptor - Dragonflight - 10-07-2011 Well, the clues are slowly being picked up. It remains to be seen how quickly they get put together. Based on what the Knights know right now, it's a data point that really won't fit anywhere. It might take a while to figure out, though. Sylia's got the evolving threat situation to figure out, and Mackie's a little distracted, right now... --- Those who fear the darkness have never seen what the light can do. - Disruptor - 10-07-2011 True. However things are not going the way Baty and Ai have planned. Loon Ent. is probably going to keep shrugging off attacks thanks to Lisa constantly upping the magic defenses. IDEC is getting involved with the outside worls more and more throwing a new variable into the plans. Now ,Yoshida is aware what Baty and Ai did to him and will be going after them. -------------------- Tom Mathews aka Disruptor |