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UY:TSY and associated stories - ECSNorway - 07-17-2012
So, Fred... Finally just decided to start plowing through TSY and see what was up.
I've made it up through the start of "My Darlings United" thus far, and I can already see where a lot of the ideas you've been using in your more recent fics come from. Looks like a number of things were on the Addventure, too? Any recommendations where to start reading, there?
And I can't think of a better way to put this, but... your writing quality has really improved a lot since TSY.
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Sucrose Octanitrate.
Proof positive that with sufficient motivation, you can make anything explode.
- Star Ranger4 - 07-17-2012
Practice, practice and more feedback... err practice. Its the same improvement in the overall quality of work you see when you compare Undocumented features Cores 1-3 with Symphony of the Sword.
Hear that thunder rolling till it seems to split the sky?
That's every ship in Grayson's Navy taking up the cry-
NO QUARTER!!!
-- "No Quarter", by Echo's Children
- sparkthatbled - 07-19-2012
Well, as far as I know, all of the Anime Addventure threads Fred writes are basically hard resets that start at one place and go on from there.
My two favourite threads, as in the threads I usually end up flicking through and want to continue from where Fred left them are Obnoxious Sentimental Princesses (where Ataru bangs the cast of Sentimental Journey, and Sailor Pluto creates a kid from the fetilised eggs of each of the girls. who is the new Sailor Terra... no I ain't kidding) and The Doctor Is In (where Ataru and Ranma and their friends are turned into superheroes), so I guess it's wise to start from there.
Though as a full disclosure, most of Fred's Anime Addventure threads all look the same to me anyway...
- Pyeknu - 01-26-2013
ECSNorway Wrote:So, Fred... Finally just decided to start plowing through TSY and see what was up.I appreciate the complement, ECS. I just wish you would have sent such comments to me via e-mail. I normally don't visit these chat sites like some people do, so when I see comments like this - or flames like some people have done to me in the past - it tends to hit me the wrong way.
I've made it up through the start of "My Darlings United" thus far, and I can already see where a lot of the ideas you've been using in your more recent fics come from. Looks like a number of things were on the Addventure, too? Any recommendations where to start reading, there?
And I can't think of a better way to put this, but... your writing quality has really improved a lot since TSY.
- Pyeknu - 01-26-2013
Star Ranger4 Wrote:Practice, practice and more feedback... err practice.Since I don't get much in the way of feedback, Star - as in direct feedback - I have no choice but to keep practicing. *shrugs*
- Pyeknu - 01-26-2013
sparkthatbled Wrote:Though as a full disclosure, most of Fred's Anime Addventure threads all look the same to me anyway...Sorry you feel that way, Spark. I try to make new things . . . but I have a lot of pet peeves (as we all do) that I like to rant on every chance I get, so I tend to focus on that.
- ECSNorway - 01-27-2013
Pyeknu Wrote:Sorry... I didn't have an email for you at the time I posted this. Still don't, to be honest. If I'd known you weren't checking the OPF threads I'd've just PM'ed you.ECSNorway Wrote:So, Fred... Finally just decided to start plowing through TSY and see what was up.I appreciate the complement, ECS. I just wish you would have sent such comments to me via e-mail. I normally don't visit these chat sites like some people do, so when I see comments like this - or flames like some people have done to me in the past - it tends to hit me the wrong way.
I've made it up through the start of "My Darlings United" thus far, and I can already see where a lot of the ideas you've been using in your more recent fics come from. Looks like a number of things were on the Addventure, too? Any recommendations where to start reading, there?
And I can't think of a better way to put this, but... your writing quality has really improved a lot since TSY.
Still, the recent stuff is fun to read, IMO, and there's some interesting worldbuilding in there.
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Sucrose Octanitrate.
Proof positive that with sufficient motivation, you can make anything explode.
- Pyeknu - 01-27-2013
ECSNorway Wrote:Sorry... I didn't have an email for you at the time I posted this. Still don't, to be honest. If I'd known you weren't checking the OPF threads I'd've just PM'ed you.Well, FYI, all my Addventure stuff (my pen-name there is "Gorgo") has my e-mail address embedded in it; if you don't know, when you post episodes there, you can put in an e-mail address for personal contact purposes.
Still, the recent stuff is fun to read, IMO, and there's some interesting worldbuilding in there.
As for FF.net, since we can't include e-mail addresses in the story text, I don't bother doing it these days.