I've got other things I ought to be finishing, really...

[firvulag]

This should end up being four pages. I've done the layout already but the pencils for page 2 didn't quite work out the way I thought they would.

Acyl, I'm sorry for the horrible butchery I've wreaked on Syndesis' costume and hair. I was working off of a couple of poor screen shots from the meeting last Thursday and your Little Legends image.
Should she be wearing a small mask over her eyes? I couldn't tell in Pocket D because of the auras.
On the gripping hand, I'm really happy with her expression in panel 3.
-F "who really should be working on other, half finished things"
--
"Those librarians are a sharp bunch."
- Calvin, _Calvin & Hobbes_

[Bob Schroeck]

Cute!
-- Bob
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...The President is on the line
As ninety-nine crab rangoons go by...

[Acyl]

Ooookkkaaayy...
Muahahaha. Damnit, that's too cool. Cute. >_
-- Acyl

[firvulag]

Superball is fun to draw.
-F
--
The Usenet Schwartzchild Radius: the point at which a sufficient mass
of BS has been accumulated that a thread implodes, and no further clue
can emerge from it.

[firvulag]

And page 3, one to go.

Thanks for the pic of Syndesis Acyl.
-F
--
"Clearly, what is needed here is a careful blend of strategy, and
extreme violence"
-- Gary S. Callison

[Acyl]

That made me laugh. Which wasn't a good thing, because I was drinking juice at the time. I didn't actually pull a classic spit-choke fluid-down-the-wrong-hole-gasp-wheeze...but I came, y'know, pretty close.
Hah.
Honestly, the simplified costumes work better for your style - cleaner, bolder lines, y'know, since you've got the whole cartoon cleaness to it. I 'specially like how you depict motion, that rocks.
-- Acyl