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bunny!
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Some things that've been going through my head for a while, in the background. I figure I'm sufficiently doped on flu medicine to put 'em into words.
The fandom is El-Hazard. The OVA, not the crappy TV series.
Okay, so ...
idea 1) - Makoto spends a lot of his time researching, trying to find a way to control the Eye of God and the Key Staff and get Ifurita back. What if he didn't limit himself to just going through the Royal Library of Florestica? What if he decided to take a page out of Fujisawa's playbook and, after a few weeks of research, packed up some notes for further perusal and went vamoos, searching for possible solutions in a vaguely Indiana Jones sort of manner? Basically, trying to find some alternative to using the Eye's effect, or more direct information on how to use it better rather than old tales from the Library.
He periodically returns to Florestica to pick up more notes and hints to other possible sites of OldTech.
A week or so before Fujisawa's wedding disaster, he finds something. And, in the usual bumbling manner of the male lead in a harem or semi-harem show, gets some more trouble out of the deal.
Ayup, he wakes up Kalia.
idea 2) - okay, so he's finally managed to make it. He's back on Earth, Master of the Power Key Staff, and all that jazz, reunited with his Lost Love. Ahem.
Only things aren't nearly as simple. See, Roshtaria and surrounding countries move forward, and as the Bugrom aren't really much more than an annoyance, and haven't been since The Eye went Berserk at the end of the first OVA series, the inevitable follows. It's merely political unrest, at first, but there is pressure brought on the Royal House to provide stability.
The first step towards that being at least trying to ensure that Roshtaria has some chance at continuing the Royal Line. Unfortunately, with Fatora being how she is, they can't exactly count on her. And Rune is suddenly up to her ears in suitors, while still not wholly recovered from the whole Gallus thing (impressions are misleading).
You see where I'm going with this, no?
So, in an effort to give her some breathing room, Londs concocts a plan and runs it past her. She hesitantly agrees. They then run it past Makoto. Who is very tempted to run screaming.
After all, who better to ensure prosperity to the country and the Alliance (such as it is nowadays) than the Sage of El-Hazard, whose wisdom and skill prevented the whole world's annihilation and tamed a Demon God? Besides, he's about as apolitical as they come, so he's just about the only candidate the other Alliance nations can agree with, other than the ones they put forward themselves.
It certainly doesn't help matters for the poor guy that Rune _is_ beautiful, smart, understanding ...
... and she doesn't seem to mind very much either, before 'not minding' turns into genuine, if subtle, enthusiasm.
Oy.
Does he manage to recover Ifurita before the wedding? If so, what then?
Or does it happen just after? How would that work out?
And yes, I'm angling for a Ifurita/Makoto/Rune polygon here. Hell, if you find a way to throw Nanami and Shayla in there for good measure, I'll sing you praises.
idea 3) the most open-ended one. The backlash from Ifurita using the Eye of God to skip worlds and even time itself wasn't quite as ... contained ... as it would have been otherwise.
The energies lashed out through the only other outlet, other than the Eye and her, available.
Meaning the Power Key Staff.
With ends up with Makoto being forced to go on his _own_ Odyssey ... but where'd he get stuck all of a sudden? And ... err ... okay, _why_ are there two preteen girls with staff weapons flying through the sky over there and slinging energy blasts at one-another ...
... more importantly, why the hell is the Staff suddenly speaking to him and calling him the Goshujin-sama in Ifurita's voice?
Well, on the flip side, once he's settled in and dealt with all the inevitable cases of mistaken identities as well as other fallout, the Time Space Administration Bureau turns out to be just the place to get some headway on dimensional travel.
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#2
Hmmm. I'd pay to see #2 and #3, quite honestly!
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Re: Ifurita bunnies
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The fandom is El-Hazard. The OVA, not the crappy TV series.
There's also OVA 2 -the one with Kalia
and the Alternate World -if you're excluding the TV series with the teenager Rune Venus and bimbo Ifurita.
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idea 1) - Makoto spends a lot of his time researching, trying to find a way to control the Eye of God and the Key Staff and get Ifurita back. What if he didn't limit himself to just going through the Royal Library of Florestica? What if he decided to take a page out of Fujisawa's playbook and, after a few weeks of research, packed up some notes for further perusal and went vamoos, searching for possible solutions in a vaguely Indiana Jones sort of manner? Basically, trying to find some alternative to using the Eye's effect, or more direct information on how to use it better rather than old tales from the Library.
He periodically returns to Florestica to pick up more notes and hints to other possible sites of OldTech.
A week or so before Fujisawa's wedding disaster, he finds something. And, in the usual bumbling manner of the male lead in a harem or semi-harem show, gets some more trouble out of the deal.
Ayup, he wakes up Kalia.

Just ahead of Jinnai? And what about Ifurita's twin? There's possibilities here.
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idea 2) - okay, so he's finally managed to make it. He's back on Earth, Master of the Power Key Staff, and all that jazz, reunited with his Lost Love. Ahem.
That is canon.
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Only things aren't nearly as simple. See, Roshtaria and surrounding countries move forward, and as the Bugrom aren't really much more than an annoyance, and haven't been since The Eye went Berserk at the end of the first OVA series, the inevitable follows. It's merely political unrest, at first, but there is pressure brought on the Royal House to provide stability.
Never under estimate Jinnai..the boy is as hard to squash as a cockroach.
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The first step towards that being at least trying to ensure that Roshtaria has some chance at continuing the Royal Line. Unfortunately, with Fatora being how she is, they can't exactly count on her. And Rune is suddenly up to her ears in suitors, while still not wholly recovered from the whole Gallus thing (impressions are misleading).
You see where I'm going with this, no?
Lemme guess...
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So, in an effort to give her some breathing room, Londs concocts a plan and runs it past her. She hesitantly agrees. They then run it past Makoto. Who is very tempted to run screaming.
Well, there is the older woman thing after all...
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After all, who better to ensure prosperity to the country and the Alliance (such as it is nowadays) than the Sage of El-Hazard, whose wisdom and skill prevented the whole world's annihilation and tamed a Demon God? Besides, he's about as apolitical as they come, so he's just about the only candidate the other Alliance nations can agree with, other than the ones they put forward themselves.
Ping Pong!
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It certainly doesn't help matters for the poor guy that Rune _is_ beautiful, smart, understanding ...
... and she doesn't seem to mind very much either, before 'not minding' turns into genuine, if subtle, enthusiasm.
Oy.
Huh..she's a shotacon eh?
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Does he manage to recover Ifurita before the wedding? If so, what then?
Then it's a romantic comedy...
Or does it happen just after? How would that work out?
then it's a romantic tragedy.
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And yes, I'm angling for a Ifurita/Makoto/Rune polygon here. Hell, if you find a way to throw Nanami and Shayla in there for good measure, I'll sing you praises.
Easily done....find out if the Islamic law allowing for four legal wives hold true here. If not, discretely apply pressure to the religious authorities that for the sake of stability to allow a dispensation to allow a one time multiple marriage.
Of course, you do know that Makato may not survive the honeymoon.
The hard part about number one is that unless Kalia is turned to the Light side of the Force, the events in OVA2 will run its course. If the 2nd Ifurita's master is still alive after that..well and good. If not, what happens then? One of the most-heartbreaking image I remember was the second Ifurita standing guard alone. No one has to spend eternity like that.

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idea 3) the most open-ended one. The backlash from Ifurita using the Eye of God to skip worlds and even time itself wasn't quite as ... contained ... as it would have been otherwise.
The energies lashed out through the only other outlet, other than the Eye and her, available.
Meaning the Power Key Staff.
End of OVA1
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With ends up with Makoto being forced to go on his _own_ Odyssey ... but where'd he get stuck all of a sudden? And ... err ... okay, _why_ are there two preteen girls with staff weapons flying through the sky over there and slinging energy blasts at one-another ...
... more importantly, why the hell is the Staff suddenly speaking to him and calling him the Goshujin-sama in Ifurita's voice?
Makoto a Childean mage? It might had been El-Hazard that Fate's mom is trying to get to.
Makoto being onii-chan to Fate?

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Well, on the flip side, once he's settled in and dealt with all the inevitable cases of mistaken identities as well as other fallout, the Time Space Administration Bureau turns out to be just the place to get some headway on dimensional travel.
D-hopping trying to get back to the end of OVA1.
Two and three sounds good. The problem with 1 is that once Kalia is awakened, the events in OVA2 will run it's course.
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Re: Ifurita bunnies
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Makoto a Childean mage? It might had been El-Hazard that Fate's mom is trying to get to.
Quite a few people have had that idea with the two places sounding similar and the whole eye of god dimensional thing. It does fit rather conveniently.
E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?"
B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell."
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Booting this thing up
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Since Striker S is already showing, this might be a good time to reboot this plot bunny.

I've neen reading the wiki on the technology of the Nanoha series and I'm amazed on how El-Hazard could be brought into the system.
Bear with me.
Do you guys recall the first Reinforce, the master program in the book of Darkness? She is categorized as a Unison device which is defined in the wiki as quote:
The Unison Device (, , Yggata Debaisu, Yunizon Debaisu?) is the most sophisticated design of device in the Belka magic system that takes the Intelligent Device idea to the extreme. The device is given a body and free will, and the power to "unite" with its user (this act of uniting called Unison Mode), thereby granting extensive control and management of his or her abilities and power. However, due to the incompatibility with many practitioners, and incidents where the device took control of its user, Unison Devices never became a viable product.
If you want a El-Hazard/Nanoha xover, you could make a case that the Book of the Midnight Sky (Book of Darkness original name) was the first attempt at the Unison device which failed catastrohically and the only way to destroy it was to use the Eye of God. But since the Eye of God is actually a dimensional transporter..guess what happened?
Ifurita (and by extension Kalia) would had been the first successful model of a Unison device. The windup procedure to awaken her would had been a safeguard to disable the unison mode. It would be interesting to speculate if the unison mode between Makoto and Ifurita is active (just not powered up). That would explain the bond between them. Ifurita also may had been the generalist model, being able to use melee and ranged attacks. The Wolkenritter are more specialized.
Those huge globes in Ifurita's staff would be the holding tanks for the energy required, which later Belkan mages would had minaturized into cartridges.
Speaking of the staff, would it be better to have a chibi-Ifurita showing up as the staff's control program?
And what part of the timeline would Makoto show up?
The Belkan system of magic uses
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Charge ahead! No! Never turn
Yes, it's into the fire we fly
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Turning my attention to concept one...
It seems to me that, while Kalia is genuinely hateful and fucked up, she's also that way for a reason. Her makers, her people lost the war. They died under Ifurita's fire, and she wants to avenge them.
Now, odds are that Makoto will detect this the first time his mechano-telepathy links with her.
Absent outside factors like the Trigger of Destruction, I can't see his reaction being anything but sympathetic and supportive, really. Of course, he'll also give her Orders about things like that, not being a fool, but he'll also be as gentle as he can about it.
So here they are, him with his arms around her to encourage her to cry on his shoulder a bit, and...
Awww! Psycho-loli's blushing! ^_^
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Awww! Psycho-loli's blushing! ^_^
Nah, Kalia's definitely not a loli. Not as well formed as Ifurita, but definitely not a loli.
And if she found out Makoto's linked to Ifurita....
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Yes, it's into the fire we fly
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...then the question would be *when* she found out - and how much of her soul does he own when she does? And *exactly* what orders has he given her? (...and a great many other interesting and subtle turn-points.)
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Awww! Psycho-loli's blushing! ^_^
Now I need to see El-Hazard, so this will make sense.
(I was originally going to say "and Nanoha", but then I reread and realized this wasn't relating to that idea.)
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Now I need to see El-Hazard, so this will make sense.
Wait for a couple of months; Geneon's about to release lower-priced box sets of the series.
Much lower-priced: $15 each, instead of $80.
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It can also the last time I checked by found on Youtobe.
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