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Maybe with a bit of work, this might be bearable...
Maybe with a bit of work, this might be bearable...
#1
Tried writing a filksong, but I'm not happy with it. For one thing, it's missing an entire verse...

Feel free to http://forums.sjgames.com/showpost.php? ... tcount=130]read the lyrics here (if you dare) and offer constructive criticism in this thread.
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Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."

- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012
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#2
I've got nothing directly applicable, but maybe you could fill the missing verse with something about dealing with an angry caller/client who doesn't understand enough to ask the right question let alone comprehend the answer?

- CD
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"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows
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#3
That could work... What do folks think of this?

There's a man whose sanity's in danger,

The calls he has to take keep getting stranger,

The things those people say

Get dumber day by day,

Odds are you'll be mad before tomorrow.



Helpdesk Agent Man,

Helpdesk Agent Man,

They've given you a flowchart

And taken away your brain.



In a windowless office on one day,

And back to that same office on the next day,

You let your self-worth slip

Hearing the bosses' quips,

Odds are you'll be mad before tomorrow.



Helpdesk Agent Man,

Helpdesk Agent Man,

They've given you a flowchart

And taken away your brain.
--
Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."

- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012
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#4
Works well enough I think - it's certainly easier to fit to the music in my head than the other verse, though I got that one after a few tries. Breaking up "windowless" the right way kept tripping me up.

- CD
--
"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows
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#5
Okay - post updated.
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Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."

- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012
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