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Chapter 15 Teaser!
Chapter 15 Teaser!
#1
Yes, I managed to eke another one out of the material I've written so far (and I am coming down to the finish line real soon, just so you know). I will warn you right now -- this passage has had some spoiler material edited out, so it's not exactly what's in the finished chapter, although the splices should be pretty much invisible.
Enjoy!
-- Bob
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"That will be all," Kate Madigan said to the brace of disguised boomer bodyguards who had escorted her to the door of her apartment."Yes, ma'am," they replied in practiced unison, and Kate got theimpression that they would have saluted her if it would not havelooked horrendously out of place. As she watched, they turnedbriskly on their heels and marched off back down the corridor tothe elevator bank.The guard boomers went almost everywhere with her, now. Here in the Tower they were especially intrusive; she was lucky that they were content to leave her while she still was in the hall; they might have insisted on inspecting the apartment before allowing her to enter. Suppressing a sigh, she keyed the door open and stepped inside.And stopped short, the door swinging shut behind her. The foyerof her apartment was filled with enticing aroma of cooking food.Eyes wide, she sniffed once, twice. "Oh, hi, you're home!" Kate dropped her briefcase in shock as Douglas Sangnoir, clad in one of her unused kitchen aprons, stuck his head out of her kitchen and into the foyer. "Dinner'll be ready in a few minutes," he continued on blithely. "Why don't you go into the living room and relax until then?"
-- Bob
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Then the horns kicked in...
...and my shoes began to squeak.
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Madigan-chan!!!
#2
*drools in envy*
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Re: Madigan-chan!!!
#3
And once again, Doug turns someone's mind into a thick liquid.Brazil has decided you're cute.
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Re: Madigan-chan!!!
#4
*Gznsark!*
More than just one, I think!!!
*goes in hunt of a funnel to pour brain back into head before it gels*"I was an Otaku before those kids came along and changed the meaning of the word."
-- HM "Howling Mad" Wilson to more than one team-mate.
Hear that thunder rolling till it seems to split the sky?
That's every ship in Grayson's Navy taking up the cry-

NO QUARTER!!!
-- "No Quarter", by Echo's Children
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Re: Chapter 15 Teaser!
#5
*snerk*
Vintage Doug. Have I mentioned lately how he cracks me up? Because it bears repeating.---------------
"A billion robot lives are about to be extinguished. Oh the Jedi are gonna feel this one."
-Professor Farnsworth
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Jon
"And that must have caused my dad's brain to break in half, replaced by a purely mechanical engine of revenge!"
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#6
I like it, but I think that apron needs to be made a hell of a lot frillier.
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#7
Madigan isn't exactly a frilly person herself.
At least it's not his "Kiss Me, I'm Metahuman!" apron.
Hm.
Although maybe it should be...
Hm.


-- Bob
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There is no spork.
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Re: Chapter 15 Teaser!
#8
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At least it's not his "Kiss Me, I'm Metahuman!" apron.
Shouldn't that be, "Kiss Me, I Metahuman!"?
Blessed be.
-n
(Say it out loud...)
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"V, did you do something foolish?"
"Yes, and it was glorious."
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Re: Chapter 15 Teaser!
#9
Well, just like Will Rogers of Warriors' World once said, "I never metahuman I didn't like."



-- Bob
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There is no spork.
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Re: Chapter 15 Teaser!
#10
*Groan*
Shouldn't that be, "Kiss Me, I Metahuman!"?
.....
..... gosh i was trying to parse this in so many ways before i say the line below about saying it out loud >_Tongue
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Take Your Candle, Go Light Your World.
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Teehee
#11
MMmmmmm, et a human.
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Re: Teehee
#12
Well, now we know what he's cookling in the kitchen for Madigan...



-- Bob
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There's no wrong way to eat a Rhesus.
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