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Anime-opener dream fragment - Tatsu no Kanshin & others
Anime-opener dream fragment - Tatsu no Kanshin & others
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Edit: subbed in Nathan's character names
Edit2: We gots a title! Tatsu no Kanshin!

Dramatis personae:
Garyuno (Of the fanged dragons) Kennan (wise son) - typical spiky-hair-anime-guy
Kouga (Elegant) Tsuchi (sledgehammer) - typical anime tomboy, Kennan's oldest/best freind
Kouga (Elegant) Gaku (music) - annoying little kid borother to Tsuchi
Gosai (Five colors) Miyou (point of view) - the new female transfer student, long black hair and red eyes
Kogal and Groupies - the Popular Girls
Sensei - Kaji or GTO type male teacher, talked into herding the monkeys on a field trip

So, anyway. Miyou transfers into the class the day before they're due for a cultural field trip to some mountain shrine or other. Kennan is immediately smitten with her graceful walk, flowing hair, and striking eyes. Tsuchi sees him going all gaga and makes a disruption to get him to snap out of it. Kogal sniffs at her, and the Groupies twitter.
Deboarding from the bus at whatever mountian, Sensei takes a headcount (Gaku somehow managed to come along also, much to Tsuchi's annoyance), then tells the kids to piss off and meet him at the shrine up top in half an hour, because he's got a headache from the damn bus ride and needs a smoke. They wander off in groups.
Kogal and Groupies pounce Miyou, who has set out up the (traditional style, wooden scaffold type) stairs that go across the cliff to where the shrine is on her own, having kept to herself on the bus ride. (She's a Strong but Quiet & Reserved type) When she brushes off Kogal's rather condescending offer to 'let Miyou hang around with her' Kogal mocks her (taking special note of freakish red eyes) and naturally so do the Groupies. Tsuchi sees this from where she and Kennan are trying to corral Gaku a bit further back, tells Ken to handle him for a minute, and rushes up to tell Kogal to lay off, or she'll kick their asses again. Kogal snipes back at her unfeminine behavior, then makes haste up the steps. Miyou tells Tsuchi that was unneccesary, but she ignores the mild brush-off and makes with the freindly chatter anyway, if mostly one-sided. She coaxes a half-grin out of Miyou for a moment, and does a little end-zone dance as they reach one of the landings.
Meanwhile, Kennan has settled on racing Gaku up to keep him occupied, and they are closing in rapidly on the girls' position. Ken, being a bit on the weenie-boy side of standard anime male build, is getting tunnel vision as they close on the hudred-fifty foot up mark, where the girls are, and is so focussed on where his next step is going that he doesn't see the girls until he rams headfirst into their butts. After some arm waving all three keep their balance, but Miyou yells at him a bit and delivers an anime-tough-girl-thwap. Gaku, of course, thinking it's great fun, decides to jump on his back at the same time, and the resulting loss of balance sends them both over the railing.
Gaku is also shaken loose by the stumble, so he ends up dangling from Ken's left arm. Kennan himself is dangling by the right arm from where Miyou has both hands wrapped around his wrist, Tsuchi being a half-second slower snagged her by the waist to help anchor.
Grips are a little slippy, so with a kiai of utmost effort, Kennan manges to bring his arm up (curl style first, to get Gaku in close to his shoulder, then up to about head hieght) and Tsuchi lets go to grab her brother, but when she tries to put him down he clings like a monkey and she can't even get an arm loose.
Kennan, shaking from that effort, just dangles, and Miyou's hands are still slipping slowly off his wrist. A quick peek down convinces him that he might as well tell her how cute he thnks she is, taking special note of red eyes. Miyou blushes and tels him to shut up, because he's going to be really embarrassed after "we" pull him up. (Tsuchi is still trying to get "Gaki" to let go, which only makes him cling tighter. A couple of other students are rubbernecking but don't have presence of mind to help.)
Just as his hand slips to the point she's only holding his palm, Sensei runs up and does a slide on his chest to end between Miyou's (spread for traction) feet, one arm out to grab Kennan by the collar. He does the arm-curl lift like it's easy, then Miyou and a finally-loose-except-one-leg Tsuchi pull him over, and the rubbernecks clap appreciatively until Sensei flips into a kipup and bawls them out for just standing there when lives were in danger as if they were watching the evening news.
Meanwhile, Kennan has slumped over at the waist, panting for breath and trying to get rid of the shakes. After a few seconds, he sees Miyou standing in front of him, looking as calm as ever, though breathing a bit heavily herself still. He gives a couple fo half-hearted laughs, and then says, "... I'm not embarrassed." This makes her blush again, and she starts to turn away. He calls for her to wait, and drops to a kneeling position, explaining as she looks back over her shoulder that a hundred feet of air between him and the ground made him realise that there are some things too important to worry about how you look when you do them. Then, he bows until his forehead touches the deck of the landing and says that since he owes her his life, anything he can do is at her command. Miyou is nonplussed, Tsuchi is amazed, and Gaku has muckled onto her waist again, still sobbing. Sensei has been yelling at the crowd all this time, so no one has really noticed their little drama.
Then I woke up, still shaky from that view.
- CD
What, you think Samuel L. Jackson isn't going to survive the zombie apocalypse?

SERVO: Loook *deeeeply* into my eyes... Tell me, what do you see?
CROW: (hypnotized) A twisted man who wants to inflict his pain upon others.
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"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows
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Anime-opener dream fragment - Tatsu no Kanshin & others - by ClassicDrogn - 08-13-2005, 08:36 PM
Re: Anime-opener dream fragment - by Valles - 08-13-2005, 10:48 PM
Re: Anime-opener dream fragment - by ClassicDrogn - 08-13-2005, 11:13 PM
Illuminati @ University - by drakensis - 08-14-2005, 01:07 AM
Re: Anime-opener dream fragment - by Valles - 08-14-2005, 01:36 AM
Re: Anime-opener dream fragment - by ClassicDrogn - 08-14-2005, 02:21 AM
Re: Anime-opener dream fragment - by Valles - 08-14-2005, 03:36 AM
Re: Anime-opener dream fragment - by ClassicDrogn - 08-14-2005, 08:20 AM
Re: Anime-opener dream fragment - by Valles - 08-14-2005, 04:04 PM
Re: Anime-opener dream fragment - by Foxboy - 08-14-2005, 04:26 PM
Re: Anime-opener dream fragment - by ClassicDrogn - 08-14-2005, 07:08 PM
Re: Anime-opener dream fragment - by Valles - 08-14-2005, 08:40 PM
Re: Anime-opener dream fragment - by ClassicDrogn - 08-14-2005, 09:26 PM
eng->chn chn->eng - by ClassicDrogn - 08-14-2005, 09:53 PM
We gots baddies! - by Valles - 08-14-2005, 10:50 PM
Re: We gots baddies! - by ClassicDrogn - 08-15-2005, 01:10 AM
Re: We gots baddies! - by Valles - 08-15-2005, 02:51 AM
Shifting ideas - by Valles - 08-15-2005, 05:00 AM
Okies to the baddies - by Foxboy - 08-15-2005, 05:12 AM
Re: Okies to the baddies - by Valles - 08-15-2005, 06:33 AM
Re: Anime-opener dream fragment - by Bob Schroeck - 08-15-2005, 07:48 AM
Re: Okies to the baddies - by ClassicDrogn - 08-15-2005, 09:09 AM
Re: Okies to the baddies - by Valles - 08-15-2005, 03:29 PM
I find this disturbing ... - by Rieverre - 08-15-2005, 03:55 PM
Re: I find this disturbing ... - by Valles - 08-15-2005, 04:29 PM
Re: Anime-opener dream fragment - by Jinx999 - 08-15-2005, 04:31 PM
Re: eng->chn chn->eng - by Acyl - 08-15-2005, 05:40 PM
Re: eng->chn chn->eng - by ClassicDrogn - 08-15-2005, 07:46 PM
Re: eng->chn chn->eng - by Valles - 08-15-2005, 10:27 PM
Re: cue the evil villain maniacal laughter please - by Crescend - 08-15-2005, 10:45 PM
Movie sign! - by ClassicDrogn - 08-16-2005, 12:03 AM
Re: Movie sign! - by Valles - 08-16-2005, 02:09 AM
Re: Movie sign! - by ClassicDrogn - 08-16-2005, 03:00 AM
Re: Movie sign! - by Valles - 08-16-2005, 04:12 AM
Re: Movie sign! - by ClassicDrogn - 08-16-2005, 05:35 AM
Re: Movie sign! - by Valles - 08-16-2005, 07:01 AM
Re: Movie sign! - by ClassicDrogn - 08-16-2005, 08:15 AM
Re: Movie sign! - by Valles - 08-16-2005, 10:03 AM
Random thought - by Foxboy - 08-16-2005, 03:39 PM
Re: Random thought - by Valles - 08-16-2005, 07:50 PM
Re: Movie sign! - by ClassicDrogn - 08-16-2005, 08:33 PM
Re: Movie sign! - by Valles - 08-16-2005, 09:21 PM
Re: Movie sign! - by ClassicDrogn - 08-16-2005, 10:11 PM
hmmm - by Rieverre - 08-16-2005, 11:34 PM
Re: hmmm - by ClassicDrogn - 08-17-2005, 12:40 AM
Dragon dining - by Valles - 08-17-2005, 01:03 AM
... Eye for the Tiger... - by Foxboy - 08-17-2005, 04:32 AM
Re: ... Eye for the Tiger... - by Valles - 08-17-2005, 05:31 AM
Re: ... Eye for the Tiger... - by ClassicDrogn - 08-17-2005, 09:11 AM
Pidgeoning holes - by Valles - 08-17-2005, 09:19 PM
Re: Pidgeoning holes - by ClassicDrogn - 08-17-2005, 10:12 PM
Re: Pidgeoning holes - by Valles - 08-18-2005, 03:57 AM
Re: Pidgeoning holes - by ClassicDrogn - 08-18-2005, 06:36 AM
Re: Pidgeoning holes - by Bob Schroeck - 08-18-2005, 01:55 PM
Re: Pidgeoning holes - by ClassicDrogn - 08-18-2005, 03:26 PM
Re: Pidgeoning holes - by Valles - 08-18-2005, 05:22 PM
Pro'lems wi' teh arm strength - by Foxboy - 08-18-2005, 06:25 PM
Re: Pro'lems wi' teh arm strength - by Crescend - 08-18-2005, 09:56 PM
Re: Pidgeoning holes - by ClassicDrogn - 08-19-2005, 01:01 AM
Re: Pidgeoning holes - by drakensis - 08-19-2005, 09:34 AM
End theme - by ClassicDrogn - 08-25-2005, 04:59 AM
Re: End theme - by Valles - 08-26-2005, 03:51 AM
Re: End theme - by ClassicDrogn - 08-26-2005, 08:47 AM
Re: End theme - by Bob Schroeck - 08-26-2005, 01:56 PM
Re: Gendo - by Berk - 08-26-2005, 09:23 PM
Re: Gendo - by Bob Schroeck - 08-27-2005, 12:29 AM
I went through the tropes Wiki... - by Valles - 09-08-2005, 02:43 PM
Re: I went through the tropes Wiki... - by Valles - 09-12-2005, 08:12 AM
Re: I went through the tropes Wiki... - by Valles - 09-13-2005, 03:00 AM
Yum, breakfast. - by ClassicDrogn - 09-13-2005, 05:02 PM
Re: Yum, breakfast. - by Valles - 09-14-2005, 05:20 AM
Re: Yum, breakfast. - by ClassicDrogn - 09-14-2005, 05:45 AM
Re: Yum, breakfast. - by Valles - 09-14-2005, 06:31 AM
Re: Yum, breakfast. - by ClassicDrogn - 09-15-2005, 04:23 AM
Keiu's coloration - by ClassicDrogn - 09-18-2005, 08:57 AM
Re: Keiu's coloration - by Valles - 09-18-2005, 11:10 AM
Re: Keiu's coloration - by ClassicDrogn - 09-22-2005, 05:44 PM
Re: Keiu's coloration - by ClassicDrogn - 10-01-2005, 03:47 AM
Re: Keiu's coloration - by Valles - 10-01-2005, 04:41 AM
Re: Keiu's coloration - by ClassicDrogn - 10-01-2005, 05:17 AM
Revised synopsis and crosslink - by ClassicDrogn - 10-21-2005, 07:26 AM
Re: Revised synopsis and crosslink - by Valles - 10-21-2005, 07:37 AM
Progress Report! - by Valles - 10-22-2005, 06:45 AM
Re: Progress Report! - by ClassicDrogn - 10-22-2005, 06:50 AM
Report the Second - by Valles - 10-23-2005, 01:47 AM
Re: Report the Second - by ClassicDrogn - 10-23-2005, 02:09 AM
Re: Report the Second - by Valles - 10-23-2005, 02:18 AM
Re: Report the Second - by ClassicDrogn - 10-23-2005, 03:29 AM
Re: Report the Second - by Valles - 10-23-2005, 04:02 AM
Re: Report the Second - by ClassicDrogn - 10-23-2005, 04:21 AM
Re: Report the Second - by Valles - 10-23-2005, 06:53 AM
Re: Report the Second - by ClassicDrogn - 10-23-2005, 08:12 AM
Outfits, and a third Progress Report - by Valles - 10-24-2005, 04:13 AM
Re: Outfits, and a third Progress Report - by HoagieOfDoom - 10-24-2005, 08:46 PM
Trying something new - by Valles - 10-25-2005, 04:13 AM
Re: Trying something new - by ClassicDrogn - 10-25-2005, 05:25 AM
Re: Trying something new - by HoagieOfDoom - 10-25-2005, 05:34 AM
Random musing - by Foxboy - 10-25-2005, 05:23 PM
Re: Random musing - by Bob Schroeck - 10-25-2005, 06:56 PM
Multireply! - by Valles - 10-27-2005, 05:01 AM
More musings - by Foxboy - 10-27-2005, 05:26 AM
GRAH! - by Valles - 11-02-2005, 02:40 AM
Re: GRAH! - by ClassicDrogn - 11-02-2005, 04:21 AM
Re: GRAH! - by Valles - 11-02-2005, 05:01 AM
Re: GRAH! - by HoagieOfDoom - 11-02-2005, 05:37 AM
Re: GRAH! - by ClassicDrogn - 11-02-2005, 06:02 AM
Re: GRAH! - by Valles - 11-02-2005, 06:34 AM
I'm an Idiot - by Valles - 11-17-2005, 09:26 AM
Re: I'm an Idiot - by ClassicDrogn - 11-17-2005, 11:28 AM
Re: I'm an Idiot - by Valles - 11-29-2005, 11:22 AM
Re: fanart - by Firvulag - 12-01-2005, 09:44 AM
Shinkansen Slam - by ClassicDrogn - 08-06-2006, 11:10 PM
Re: Shinkansen Slam - by ClassicDrogn - 12-13-2006, 07:53 AM

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