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That was interesting.
Some of it was funny.
Overall, worth the time it took to read, but not likely worth the time to revise into a polished form.
I *am* interested in reading the Further Adventures of Ping.
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That was pretty much my assessment except I'd add disjointed and clumsy in many places, which is the reason it was almost deleted.
Rereading after letting it sit for a month made me smile enough to think it might make others smile.
I've had Ping the not so Mercyless around in one form or another since the early 1980's and I've never written more than a RPG outline.
So I'm Sorry your not likely to see anything on his adventures.
howard melton
God Bless
That was interesting.
Some of it was funny.
Overall, worth the time it took to read, but not likely worth the time to revise into a polished form.
I *am* interested in reading the Further Adventures of Ping.
/ENDQUOTE/
That was pretty much my assessment except I'd add disjointed and clumsy in many places, which is the reason it was almost deleted.
Rereading after letting it sit for a month made me smile enough to think it might make others smile.
I've had Ping the not so Mercyless around in one form or another since the early 1980's and I've never written more than a RPG outline.
So I'm Sorry your not likely to see anything on his adventures.
howard melton
God Bless