you might want to add the fact that the suits have animal heads painted on their helmets to the description of the suits, worded in a more elegant fashion of course.
Other than that it looks ok, reserveing future judegemnt until/if I see more. And aren't you working on too many bunnies already Vales?
E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?"
B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell."
Other than that it looks ok, reserveing future judegemnt until/if I see more. And aren't you working on too many bunnies already Vales?
E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?"
B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell."