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Insertions for a living
Re: "'cause I'm inserting for a living..."
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I concur. 'cause that's gotta be one of the most original takes on an EVA fight...
...I mean, I nearly keeled over when our hero used a telephone pole as a splint.
The build-up is handled great, too, as is the narrative flow...especially how it all carries to the point where the 'I' and 'Shinji' become 'Our' and 'We'...an effective way of conveying the sense of synchronisation and merging.
Kudos.
-- Acyl
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Insertions for a living - by SkyeFire - 11-10-2006, 03:56 AM
Re: Insertions for a living - by Black Aeronaut - 11-10-2006, 05:13 AM
Re: Insertions for a living - by Bob Schroeck - 11-10-2006, 08:46 AM
Re: Insertions for a living - by Acyl - 11-10-2006, 06:13 PM
Re: Insertions for a living - by Bob Schroeck - 11-10-2006, 09:43 PM
The end of the beginning - by SkyeFire - 11-12-2006, 03:40 AM
Re: The end of the beginning - by Sirrocco - 11-12-2006, 05:01 AM
Re: The end of the beginning - by Bob Schroeck - 11-12-2006, 05:32 AM
Re: The end of the beginning - by Rieverre - 11-12-2006, 05:58 AM
Re: "'cause I'm inserting for a living..." - by Acyl - 11-12-2006, 08:00 PM

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