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Team Eleven
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I plan to explore their past in much the same way Naruto normally does so - flashbacks.
Well if that's the way you desire to go, then that's okay. I can hardly make you write the way I think you ought to, now can I? ^_^;;
Even in the Anime there was more to the exposition. Enter Uzamaki Naruto, grand prankster at large. Okay, well now! He's certainly a trouble maker. Things settle and now we see a bit more of his personality and before long we know quite a bit about Naruto. We also see how he interacts with others for the most part - the beginings of relationships within his genin team before they are even selected as such.
Little, yet important things. Not the earth shattering stuff. This makes it a lot easier for the reader to relate to the character.
Just bear in mind - the way you start a story is a pretty good reflection on how the rest of the plot runs.
Oh, one other thing - opinions tend to vary on how long a chapter should be. Me: I like to shoot for enough content to translate into a good half-hour of TV viewing. So, if you like your chapters a bit on the smaller side, then that's cool. It's all a style thing.
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Team Eleven - by ECSNorway - 11-07-2006, 01:30 AM
um, no - by Rieverre - 11-07-2006, 02:23 AM
Re: um, no - by Evil Midnight Lurker - 11-07-2006, 03:29 AM
Re: um, no - by Evil Midnight Lurker - 11-07-2006, 03:41 AM
Ryo - by Rieverre - 11-07-2006, 03:45 AM
Re: Ryo - by ECSNorway - 11-07-2006, 04:08 AM
re: Akane - by Foxboy - 11-07-2006, 05:26 AM
Re: Ryo - by Rieverre - 11-07-2006, 05:34 AM
hm - by Foxboy - 11-07-2006, 06:23 AM
Re: hm - by ECSNorway - 11-07-2006, 08:15 AM
Re: hm - by Black Aeronaut - 11-07-2006, 08:53 AM
Re: hm - by ECSNorway - 11-07-2006, 09:16 AM
Re: Team Eleven - by anowack - 11-07-2006, 09:18 AM
Re: Team Eleven - by ECSNorway - 11-07-2006, 09:21 AM
Re: hm - by Black Aeronaut - 11-07-2006, 09:38 AM
Re: Team Eleven - by anowack - 11-07-2006, 09:57 AM
Re: Team Eleven - by Evil Midnight Lurker - 11-07-2006, 10:20 AM
Re: Team Eleven - by Acyl - 11-07-2006, 05:40 PM
Re: Team Eleven - by Sirrocco - 11-07-2006, 06:13 PM
Re: Team Eleven - by ECSNorway - 11-07-2006, 06:14 PM
Re: Ryo - by Norgarth - 11-07-2006, 09:44 PM
Re: Ryo - by Norgarth - 11-09-2006, 10:39 PM
randoms - by Sirrocco - 11-10-2006, 03:36 AM
Re: randoms - by Evil Midnight Lurker - 11-10-2006, 03:44 AM

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