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The Narrow Gate (Naruto Fic) - Chapter 1 complete draft
Re: The Narrow Gate (Naruto Fic) - Chapter 1 complete draft
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This was rather engrossing once I got past the stuff I'd seen before. I'd known that Sasuke had a chip on his shoulder for sure, but goodness...
*Sighs and shakes head* Looks like rough times are ahead for Team 7. Not to say that this is a bad fic - quite the contrary, it's looking very good, indeed. That said, I wonder if these three are going to learn something about teamwork and solidarity, and maybe, hopefully, something about family as well. That seems to be what they all need at this point.
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Re: The Narrow Gate (Naruto Fic) - Chapter 1 complete draft - by CattyNebulart - 11-08-2006, 05:42 AM
Re: The Narrow Gate (Naruto Fic) - Chapter 1 complete draft - by CattyNebulart - 11-08-2006, 06:54 AM
Re: The Narrow Gate (Naruto Fic) - Chapter 1 complete draft - by CattyNebulart - 11-08-2006, 07:33 AM
Re: The Narrow Gate (Naruto Fic) - Chapter 1 complete draft - by Black Aeronaut - 11-08-2006, 09:27 AM

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