Quote:Glad to hear it. Dark fics are okay now and then, but they have to be very well done in order to be enjoyable tragedies.
I believe in happy endings. If you can't get those in fiction...then where the hell can you? Of course, even though the story ends well...or mostly well...doesn't mean there ain't gonna be troubles for our heroes along the way.
As for Naruto's characterization... Yeah, I agree with all that's been said so far. Naruto's gung-ho, all right, but that stuff before the free-for-all kinda went beyond his limits. In fact, if I were in his shoes, I wouldn't quite draw so much attention to myself.
If I were characterizing him, I'd go for some snarky remarks at that point. They seem to be more his forte. Possibly aimed at Kabuto and Sasuke in an alternating pattern.
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