Ah. Well. It's not like I don't like it. As I said, it's fun to read. ^_^
(Even if I don't know all of the sources they're drawing on. I only know some of the anime and even then, not many! I mean, I caught Agent Smith of Matrix fame, I've watched parts of Utena before, but someone like Dr. Doom -- I've heard of mentioned in passing -- but I have -no- idea who he is or what he did and so on. Hrm. Probably missing a lot of references now that I think about it...
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I wasn't criticizing that their relationships were odd. It just seemed like some of the relationships got tacked on with little to no foreshadowing.
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(Even if I don't know all of the sources they're drawing on. I only know some of the anime and even then, not many! I mean, I caught Agent Smith of Matrix fame, I've watched parts of Utena before, but someone like Dr. Doom -- I've heard of mentioned in passing -- but I have -no- idea who he is or what he did and so on. Hrm. Probably missing a lot of references now that I think about it...

I wasn't criticizing that their relationships were odd. It just seemed like some of the relationships got tacked on with little to no foreshadowing.
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