Acyl, I like it. This could grow some really interesting twists.
May I tenatively suggest an alternative to "Pervert"? Sadist. It would fit without hardly changing any of your existing dialogue -- heck, maybe this could become Naruto's new favorite epithet, instead of "Pervert."![[Image: smile.gif]](http://www.ezboard.com/intl/aenglish/images/emoticons/smile.gif)
Naruto: "You're one of those watchacallums, a Sadie-Hawkinist, one that enjoys torturing children!"
Sasuke:
Sakura: "That's Sado-Masochist, Naruto."
Naruto: "Isn't that what I said?"
May I tenatively suggest an alternative to "Pervert"? Sadist. It would fit without hardly changing any of your existing dialogue -- heck, maybe this could become Naruto's new favorite epithet, instead of "Pervert."
Naruto: "You're one of those watchacallums, a Sadie-Hawkinist, one that enjoys torturing children!"
Sasuke:
Sakura: "That's Sado-Masochist, Naruto."
Naruto: "Isn't that what I said?"