Givne the number of basic continuity and logic holes, on top of the tactics and strategy thing? No, I havew to agree, she's just not that good sat it. Part of it of course is that no one can be good at everything and readers outnumber her by millions to one, even just within the fanfic community thousands to one, all picking apart one or another aspect and batting around variations through the multitude of fics, most likely a lot of it is not having been a novelist for long before getting the big break. Beyond and above all that... it can't be too bad, or people wouldn't be aused enough by the stories to keep buying those millions of copies every few years, as the next book comes out, now would they?
I'm not one of them, but I expect I'll give her third series a try, if there is one, some day in the 2030s or so.
- CDSERVO: Loook *deeeeply* into my eyes... Tell me, what do you see?
CROW: (hypnotized) A twisted man who wants to inflict his pain upon others.
For the next 72 hours, Itachi intoned, I will slap you with this trout. - Spying no Jutsu, chapter 3
"In the futuristic taco bell of the year 20XX, justice wears an aluminum sombrero!"hemlock-martini
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"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows
I'm not one of them, but I expect I'll give her third series a try, if there is one, some day in the 2030s or so.
- CDSERVO: Loook *deeeeply* into my eyes... Tell me, what do you see?
CROW: (hypnotized) A twisted man who wants to inflict his pain upon others.
For the next 72 hours, Itachi intoned, I will slap you with this trout. - Spying no Jutsu, chapter 3
"In the futuristic taco bell of the year 20XX, justice wears an aluminum sombrero!"hemlock-martini
--
"Anko, what you do in your free time is your own choice. Use it wisely. And if you do not use it wisely, make sure you thoroughly enjoy whatever unwise thing you are doing." - HymnOfRagnorok as Orochimaru at SpaceBattles
woot Med. Eng., verb, 1st & 3rd pers. prsnt. sg. know, knows