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Rage Across Gundam Seed
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Re: More ke-ray-zee
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08-22-2006, 12:34 AM
hey Elsa? noticed a typo...
His collarbone broke. He screamed and felt something shard and jagged leave his flesh.
I assume you meant 'sharp' rather than 'shard'.
story looks good, but the only Gundam series I've seen are Wing and Seed, so I'm notgetting the background. I've heard Seed is basicly a retelling of the 1st Gundam series, so I'm assuming miss eyepatch is from that series.__________________
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Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 06-21-2006, 12:21 AM
re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by ordnance11 - 06-21-2006, 02:45 AM
feedback - by Logan Darklighter - 06-21-2006, 02:50 AM
Re: re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by Valles - 06-21-2006, 03:33 AM
Re: re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 06-21-2006, 11:42 AM
hehe ... - by Rieverre - 06-21-2006, 05:26 PM
Re: hehe ... - by ClassicDrogn - 06-21-2006, 10:50 PM
Re: hehe ... - by happerry - 06-22-2006, 05:35 AM
Re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 06-22-2006, 09:14 AM
Re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 06-22-2006, 11:05 PM
Re: re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by Valles - 06-23-2006, 04:59 AM
Re: re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by Elsa Bibat - 06-23-2006, 04:23 PM
Re: re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 06-23-2006, 07:01 PM
Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 06-26-2006, 11:18 PM
Whee, more to read - by Logan Darklighter - 06-27-2006, 02:19 AM
re: Whee, more to read - by drakensis - 06-27-2006, 09:53 PM
Re: re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by Valles - 06-29-2006, 08:02 AM
Re: re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 06-29-2006, 09:15 AM
Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 07-03-2006, 10:57 PM
Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED VOLITION - by Valles - 07-04-2006, 02:59 AM
This is where things change - by ordnance11 - 07-04-2006, 05:05 PM
> This is where things change - by drakensis - 07-04-2006, 09:49 PM
Re: Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED VOLITION - by Valles - 07-05-2006, 05:37 PM
Re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 07-06-2006, 09:57 PM
Re: Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED VOLITION - by Valles - 07-06-2006, 11:27 PM
Re: Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED VOLITION - by Valles - 07-07-2006, 02:52 AM
Re: Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED VOLITION - by Valles - 07-08-2006, 04:38 AM
Re: Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED VOLITION - by Valles - 07-08-2006, 02:34 PM
Re: Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED VOLITION - by Valles - 07-09-2006, 04:30 AM
Re: Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED VOLITION - by Valles - 07-09-2006, 05:17 PM
Re: Kidou Senshi Gundam SEED VOLITION - by Valles - 07-11-2006, 03:48 AM
Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 07-11-2006, 09:52 PM
Wow. - by katreus - 07-13-2006, 03:52 AM
Which reminds me... - by katreus - 07-13-2006, 07:25 AM
Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 07-14-2006, 01:00 PM
Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 07-15-2006, 06:27 PM
Re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by Norgarth - 07-16-2006, 01:17 AM
Re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by Valles - 07-16-2006, 01:22 AM
Re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by Valles - 07-16-2006, 05:27 AM
Re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 07-16-2006, 07:05 AM
Drak: - by katreus - 07-17-2006, 03:15 AM
Speaking of Which... - by DKnight54 - 07-17-2006, 03:16 AM
Re: Speaking of Which... - by drakensis - 07-17-2006, 09:07 AM
Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 07-18-2006, 07:49 AM
Re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by katreus - 07-21-2006, 04:34 AM
Re: Rage Across Gundam Seed - by drakensis - 07-21-2006, 07:10 AM
Sitting in the brdige chair - by ordnance11 - 07-21-2006, 09:23 PM
Re: Sitting in the brdige chair - by drakensis - 07-22-2006, 06:57 PM
Gundam Seed Volition - by Valles - 07-23-2006, 03:00 AM
Doing a Belisarius... - by ordnance11 - 07-23-2006, 06:44 PM
Re: Gundam Seed Volition - by Valles - 08-02-2006, 04:52 AM
Re: Gundam Seed Volition - by drakensis - 08-02-2006, 08:21 AM
Re: Gundam Seed Volition - by katreus - 08-02-2006, 08:26 AM
Re: Gundam Seed Volition - by Valles - 08-03-2006, 02:42 AM
Re: Gundam Seed Volition - by Valles - 08-06-2006, 01:59 PM
Re: Gundam Seed Volition - by Valles - 08-06-2006, 06:35 PM
A bit of crazy... - by Elsa Bibat - 08-20-2006, 09:00 PM
re: A bit of crazy - by DKnight54 - 08-20-2006, 09:28 PM
Re: re: A bit of crazy - by Elsa Bibat - 08-20-2006, 09:53 PM
More ke-ray-zee - by Elsa Bibat - 08-21-2006, 04:43 PM
Re: More ke-ray-zee - by Norgarth - 08-22-2006, 12:34 AM
Re: More ke-ray-zee - by Elsa Bibat - 08-22-2006, 09:07 AM
Even more ke-ray-zee - by Elsa Bibat - 08-22-2006, 11:37 AM
Not what's next - by Valles - 09-05-2006, 09:53 PM
re: Not what's next - by Rieverre - 09-05-2006, 11:36 PM
Re: re: Not what's next - by Valles - 09-06-2006, 04:51 AM
Re: re: Not what's next - by Rieverre - 09-06-2006, 08:14 AM

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