Much better. Now the only thing I can think of (besides stuff covered in the other sections, that will exist later) is an addition to 15. Don't let the reviewers write the story for you... unless your writing as a improv style thing for a challenge.
What I mean is that don't radically change the story just to make some the reviewers happy. Things like making the main couple in the story with other people based on the idea that the canon main couple is 'boring' and that these others being a couple is 'exciting'. That example is covered by fanon comments, but changing the story to make random loud people happy, and expand their target story features is just make a target group happy.
Next is have a clue where you are going. Have a basic idea where the story will end up. Don't just start writing and keep going and going and going. Unless you have no intention of ending the story. A continuing series of story arcs are better that a story that takes forever to go nowhere.
Some of this is probably next section material... however don't ignore the reviewers should be followed by don't let a group of them railroad the story so they like it. THere are people out there who review story (sometimes with a single sentence) then try to make the story a mirror of their favorite subgenre.
What I mean is that don't radically change the story just to make some the reviewers happy. Things like making the main couple in the story with other people based on the idea that the canon main couple is 'boring' and that these others being a couple is 'exciting'. That example is covered by fanon comments, but changing the story to make random loud people happy, and expand their target story features is just make a target group happy.
Next is have a clue where you are going. Have a basic idea where the story will end up. Don't just start writing and keep going and going and going. Unless you have no intention of ending the story. A continuing series of story arcs are better that a story that takes forever to go nowhere.
Some of this is probably next section material... however don't ignore the reviewers should be followed by don't let a group of them railroad the story so they like it. THere are people out there who review story (sometimes with a single sentence) then try to make the story a mirror of their favorite subgenre.