I have read one thing where not labelling seems to work - in the book I'm reading right now, there are parts that are the internal discussions of a sort of multiple-personality. (Actually four people combining into one entity.) It's still hard to tell exactly who is "speaking", but it works for this case.
(One of the things that gives me fits in my writing is coming up with enough different ways to tag my dialogue...)
And another thing...
-Morgan."I have no interest in ordinary humans. If there are any aliens, time travelers, or espers here, come sleep with me."
---From "The Ecchi of Haruhi Suzumiya"
-----(Not really)
(One of the things that gives me fits in my writing is coming up with enough different ways to tag my dialogue...)
And another thing...
Quote:Now I want to go see Bubblegum Crisis just so I can write a fic where this happens. '.'
the thought of a Boomer storming down a MegaTokyo street and applying makeup to everyone is priceless...
-Morgan."I have no interest in ordinary humans. If there are any aliens, time travelers, or espers here, come sleep with me."
---From "The Ecchi of Haruhi Suzumiya"
-----(Not really)