1) Again, remove all FFML references. This is turning out to be a fantastic essay/paper, removing the FFML refs will make it more accessible.
2) You've made some caveat notes here and there, for example bringing up Dickens when referring to Chekov's Gun and planning-as-you-go writing. At some point you need to mention that *any* rule in your guide can be freely violated...
*IF* you know what you're doing and are *AWARE IN ADVANCE* you're doing it. This is not an act for the rank novice.
3) In a moment of shameless self-promotion, I'd like to mention OMB as an example of talking to the reader. It's chock-full of "narrator's notes" and may be a useful example.
4) I'd recommend a 'know your audience' section. --
Christopher Angel, aka JPublic
The Works of Christopher Angel
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2) You've made some caveat notes here and there, for example bringing up Dickens when referring to Chekov's Gun and planning-as-you-go writing. At some point you need to mention that *any* rule in your guide can be freely violated...
*IF* you know what you're doing and are *AWARE IN ADVANCE* you're doing it. This is not an act for the rank novice.
3) In a moment of shameless self-promotion, I'd like to mention OMB as an example of talking to the reader. It's chock-full of "narrator's notes" and may be a useful example.
4) I'd recommend a 'know your audience' section. --
Christopher Angel, aka JPublic
The Works of Christopher Angel