Quote:Oh, yeah, this one. Read this a while back. It has the potential to have been a good story, but it is drowned in run-on sentences, random capitalization, a fair number of missing words, bungled edits, and just to spice things up, the occasional misspelling/typo.
A Zeppo in Gotham by Lisa Roquin
Abrihet's characterization is just wonderful, though, and I did read the thing to the end despite all its manifold faults...
-- Bob
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...The President is on the line
As ninety-nine crab rangoons go by...