Quote:The story will last long enough to get to Tabris (let alone Matriel) that way? I mean seriously, you have no idea of balance in a story. Itll be long spam with lemon content your way. Your better off making the graphic porn aspects side stories (that have intros that lean to scene changes) or itll be one mindless series of lemon scenes. Which is a waste with all the Eva like mind games that can be played that and sense Kensuke and Toji were in the entry plug when Shamshiel was offed and they dont have their own angelling to deflect the kinky freak you can really embarrass them by making them end up in hard to explain situations that involve Shamshiel. I mean someone that drags them off into kinky situations that the female involved is never present? Comic gold, expecially if they end up tied up together in comprising situations no one can explain. (This wont work in the gigantisizing suit.)
Soft-core? That's like heatless fire! Egad, man, what's the point?!
Then you have the talking giant angle, this is ignoring a primary focus i[n Eva if the giant angels can answer questions right off the bat that takes out the entire What is going on? Why is this happening thing? Which will makes it pointless not to just use original characters. Not Shinji Shinjis are as bad as not Ranma Ranmas.
Also, the scenario as your stating it will make Shinji too tired by the time Ramiel is dealt with to do anything, but get the society destroyed for whatever reason it happens to be under attack If collapsing under its own boredom doesnt kill it first. Death by character bloat is the most common cause of harem thread/story death you just have far too many extra characters that will just accumulate so unless they get recalled or something its just not going to work right I mean if the just boink everything that moves, it will quickly be nothing, but mindless porn. Which means you might as well have Shinji play them off against each other and leave.
Read a few of the old harem threads on Anime Adventures for examples of harem thread deaths.
Quote:Ninja: La Blue girl. Turtle: Shell: portable private room she can lock anyone she doesnt want to come in out of. Private time as Ramiel is shy, as shown by how she attacks anyone near her, with kill shots.
How the heck does 'turtle themed assault ninja' figure into porn? I just picked that trait because it seemed obligated to show up at some point and I couldn't think of anything really suited to a giant floating d8.
Quote:Drills fail to pump drills spin in one direction at a time and penetrate things. That was the point of the kill shots ninjitsu is all about quick, one hit kills. As are Ramiels laser beams the drill is more a relentlessness thing. Turtle up (all defense mode) an concentrate on one task which means shell be prone to locking herself away and doing personal project (like carving things or painting tiny models and figures) or wringing every last bit of energy out of Shinji.
Well, on the d8 with the drill, I think the DRILL is the item to focus on. A fondness for insertion and hard pumping, both giving and receiving.
Quote:Or maybe their gigantasizing device. They have to get that big somehow. So far Lurker your acting like youd rent Titanic just to fast forward to the nudity and pause it.
The Angels' actual Cores are indeed red and glowing, but they're a lot smaller in proportion and somewhat more concealed. And attacking them is indeed a key to victory. ^.^
(Edit: Fixed quote markup. -- Bob)