Shito-XXX (will never be worksafe)

[Bob Schroeck]

---

The story will last long enough to get to Tabris (let alone Matriel) that way? I mean seriously, you have no idea of balance in a story. Itll be long spam with lemon content your way. Your better off making the graphic porn aspects side stories (that have intros that lean to scene changes) or itll be one mindless series of lemon scenes.

---

Although I don't entirely agree with his analysis, I think Necratoid's got a point here. Build a real story and branch off into the lemon stuff on the side. That doesn't mean you can't have seriously heavy lime in the story proper...

-- Bob
---------
For Jor-El so loved the Earth, he sent his only begotten son...