Actually, in cases of character dialog, the gramatical errors sometimes seemed to add to the characters. We have a guy from Korea and another from Italy using English to comunicate with each other. It's not surprising if their command of English is imperfect.
However, there are plenty of errors in the descriptive text to fix, which have already been pointed out.
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No, I don't believe the world has gone mad. In order for it to go mad it would need to have been sane at some point.
However, there are plenty of errors in the descriptive text to fix, which have already been pointed out.
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No, I don't believe the world has gone mad. In order for it to go mad it would need to have been sane at some point.