The biggest problem for me reading these scenelets is I don't really feel connected to the characters. It doesn't help that I don't -know- a good half of the characters from whatever manga/anime they come from and a lot of it just gets thrown at me. This probably won't be a problem for the rest of the board though. However, even the ones that I do know of from their original setting are radically different.
That's not a problem because it -is- a different setting but most of the character development seems to go under the radar (such as the accidentally wandering into Konohagakure). Again, I understand you're trying to get to the meat of the story really fast but it leaves me bewildered and the characters are basically OCs to me.
In time, as you explicate it more, this probably'll change.
That's not a problem because it -is- a different setting but most of the character development seems to go under the radar (such as the accidentally wandering into Konohagakure). Again, I understand you're trying to get to the meat of the story really fast but it leaves me bewildered and the characters are basically OCs to me.
In time, as you explicate it more, this probably'll change.