A Hard-Boiled Plot Bunny

[Aleh]

Interesting idea. It's almost a shame that you won't do anything with it, but it's pretty well written.
As a side note, that's probably totally irrelevant, there's a real Philip Nakajima. He's a research analyst at Barclays Capital and has an MBA from the University of Edinburgh.-- This message brought to you by Ely Lilly, makers of SeraFem: Happy Pills for PMS.