I'm writing this here to respond to happerry's suggestion of it being good without clogging the new fics thread. Continuing from what started there.
The fic in question is here: www.fanfiction.net/s/2864591/1/
That should be first level charicter: and to be the captain of the 11th you have to be able to win against the last one in combat. Though looking again I can't see what squad he managed to get vice captainship of (with no explained experience)... the only ones mentioned were the 11th and the 1st and it isn't either of those, I think, details are missing on this... but 'Harry' is getting a captainship upgrade from his vice-captain current rank.
In otherwords the Bleach parts are non-sensical. The Harry Potter parts are about bashing of the Wizard World. 'Harry' is not recognizable... and he has to have an 'Aura of Smooth' to get away with saying he is wearing "These are the latest in military issue HUD glasses" then "Heaven, is what I believe you westerners call it." Providing no proof or doing anything a kid can't normally do, he is utterly believed.
Read/skimmed the 3rd chapter and found "Bankai Hyourinmaru", no reference to the second mode at all. Not that it matters considering its a bankai form so impressive its awesome form is to good too describe. The invisible form of a sword maybe? The fact its still a sword is mentioned... but not what that form is. I'm appartently suppose to become involved in a story with this level of detail bt baffled how.
Mentions the 10 division being his captainship... yeah.
Seriously, why do you think this was good, happerry?
The fic in question is here: www.fanfiction.net/s/2864591/1/
Quote:Hollow transformation energies are localized by where the Hollows are at the time... so he had to transform in Harry's old cupboard bedroom or this is a nonsense line. To believe anything else means that Harry walked around for years radiating high levels of Hollow transformation energies... inside an area monitored for exotic energies area, in an England, where all such energies are erased on general principle.
There! The cupboard under the stairs, where he'd been moved to, shortly before his body's destruction. The negative energy of a Hollows' transformation almost caked the tiny "room". Yamamoto had certainly not been joking when he had said that Voldemort had been unable to change for too long.
That should be first level charicter: and to be the captain of the 11th you have to be able to win against the last one in combat. Though looking again I can't see what squad he managed to get vice captainship of (with no explained experience)... the only ones mentioned were the 11th and the 1st and it isn't either of those, I think, details are missing on this... but 'Harry' is getting a captainship upgrade from his vice-captain current rank.
In otherwords the Bleach parts are non-sensical. The Harry Potter parts are about bashing of the Wizard World. 'Harry' is not recognizable... and he has to have an 'Aura of Smooth' to get away with saying he is wearing "These are the latest in military issue HUD glasses" then "Heaven, is what I believe you westerners call it." Providing no proof or doing anything a kid can't normally do, he is utterly believed.
Read/skimmed the 3rd chapter and found "Bankai Hyourinmaru", no reference to the second mode at all. Not that it matters considering its a bankai form so impressive its awesome form is to good too describe. The invisible form of a sword maybe? The fact its still a sword is mentioned... but not what that form is. I'm appartently suppose to become involved in a story with this level of detail bt baffled how.
Mentions the 10 division being his captainship... yeah.
Seriously, why do you think this was good, happerry?