I'm not familiar with Bleach, but this fic makes it too easy for Harry to defeat Voldemort
No doubt a good crossover could be written - give the wizards knowledge of the Bleach-style occult, and maybe tie in Dementors, who are soul-eaters - but this isn't it.
The same author also has a Naruto crossover, which could be interesting. However, this fic too, while technically competent, is grossly unbalanced.
In both cases, it's not the writing as such that's bad; it's the plot construction.
No doubt a good crossover could be written - give the wizards knowledge of the Bleach-style occult, and maybe tie in Dementors, who are soul-eaters - but this isn't it.
The same author also has a Naruto crossover, which could be interesting. However, this fic too, while technically competent, is grossly unbalanced.
In both cases, it's not the writing as such that's bad; it's the plot construction.