... I've finally read the new chapter of this, and I'm thinking that it might have jumped the shark. The author's problems with homophones and syntax have finally overwhelmed the story for me, and the plot was just wandering as far as I was concerned. I was finding it hard to keep my attention on it. I think I'll give him another chapter or so to rehook me, but at the moment it looks like this has started sliding downhill.
-- Bob
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It's a "magical" land. I think "magical" is ancient Greek for "pain in the butt". -- Bun-Bun, Sluggy Freelance, 11/9/03
-- Bob
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It's a "magical" land. I think "magical" is ancient Greek for "pain in the butt". -- Bun-Bun, Sluggy Freelance, 11/9/03