didn't get much done today. Here is the scene and a half I did get done. I still need a title for this thing. Any ideas?
Oh and bob I was thinking about putting doug in here as an 'Innocent Bystander' That doesn't notice the goingons in this world and who somehow misses the Bureaus attempts to track him down. Maybe have a secene of him passing Nanoha and Fate while thinking on how peaceful this world is and they are without worries. Cut to their viewpoint about protecting helpless people such as that guy with the wierd motorcyle helmet while worring about the Wolken Rittern, and then have Doug as a running gag that shows up a few times until he leaves around episode 11 wondering why a song about escaping certain doom or somesuch would be the gatesong for this world. May I? Pretty please with a cherry on top?
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Fate are you alright! screamed Nanoha telepathically as smoke started to obscure my vision.
I'm fine, I reply in the same manner, protect Arisa and Suzuka. I'll take care of these guys. They are trying to get away, I realized as I heard the car tires squeal. They wont get far. Plasma Lancer.
Yes Sir said Bardiche as the yellow bolt shot out over the car before turning and smashing through their engine.
We surrender! Came the desperate cries from the wrecked vehicle. The other guy is getting away! But I can't leave these guys or the might try to kidnap someone else. Chrono, I call out telepathically, how soon can you be here to take these guys of my hands?
I'm already on my way we should be there in a minute or so.
The smoke is too thick, I can't see anything. Come out of there with your hands where I can see them. I called out before walking in the direction where the car crashed. Just the the hiss of smoke escaping the grenades stopped.
Ok Fate we are here. Where are the trouble makers? asked Chrono as he and a pair of Bureau Officials arrived on the scene.
In this smoke cloud take care of them while I go looking for the one that escaped.
^_^
Agent Anderson was observing this whole fiasco from the apartment building across the street. He was not happy, not happy at all. He didn't like Smith and he didn't like the idea of kidnapping a young girl, but he still didn't want to go back and report this to the Commander.
E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?"
B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell."
Oh and bob I was thinking about putting doug in here as an 'Innocent Bystander' That doesn't notice the goingons in this world and who somehow misses the Bureaus attempts to track him down. Maybe have a secene of him passing Nanoha and Fate while thinking on how peaceful this world is and they are without worries. Cut to their viewpoint about protecting helpless people such as that guy with the wierd motorcyle helmet while worring about the Wolken Rittern, and then have Doug as a running gag that shows up a few times until he leaves around episode 11 wondering why a song about escaping certain doom or somesuch would be the gatesong for this world. May I? Pretty please with a cherry on top?
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Fate are you alright! screamed Nanoha telepathically as smoke started to obscure my vision.
I'm fine, I reply in the same manner, protect Arisa and Suzuka. I'll take care of these guys. They are trying to get away, I realized as I heard the car tires squeal. They wont get far. Plasma Lancer.
Yes Sir said Bardiche as the yellow bolt shot out over the car before turning and smashing through their engine.
We surrender! Came the desperate cries from the wrecked vehicle. The other guy is getting away! But I can't leave these guys or the might try to kidnap someone else. Chrono, I call out telepathically, how soon can you be here to take these guys of my hands?
I'm already on my way we should be there in a minute or so.
The smoke is too thick, I can't see anything. Come out of there with your hands where I can see them. I called out before walking in the direction where the car crashed. Just the the hiss of smoke escaping the grenades stopped.
Ok Fate we are here. Where are the trouble makers? asked Chrono as he and a pair of Bureau Officials arrived on the scene.
In this smoke cloud take care of them while I go looking for the one that escaped.
^_^
Agent Anderson was observing this whole fiasco from the apartment building across the street. He was not happy, not happy at all. He didn't like Smith and he didn't like the idea of kidnapping a young girl, but he still didn't want to go back and report this to the Commander.
E: "Did they... did they just endorse the combination of the JSDF and US Army by showing them as two lesbian lolicons moving in together and holding hands and talking about how 'intimate' they were?"
B: "Have you forgotten so soon? They're phasing out Don't Ask, Don't Tell."