My problem is that even if you take the same sized 'chunk' of the original, Gryph did a better job of presenting his characters and their voices.
The story's okay, it's not his best though. I felt the original was very well crafted, and he's not working to the same standard right now.
We'll see what he does with it, though.
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Christopher Angel, aka JPublic
The Works of Christopher Angel
The story's okay, it's not his best though. I felt the original was very well crafted, and he's not working to the same standard right now.
We'll see what he does with it, though.
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Christopher Angel, aka JPublic
The Works of Christopher Angel
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