... niiiiiice, Ebony.
Offhand, I can't see anything wrong with it. Brownie points for making it sound like a believable historical record.
Other than the fact that it makes me want to read what happened next real bad.
Dare we expect a follow-up?
-Griever
When tact is required, use brute force. When force is required, use greater force.
When the greatest force is required, use your head. Surprise is everything. - The Book of Cataclysm
Offhand, I can't see anything wrong with it. Brownie points for making it sound like a believable historical record.
Other than the fact that it makes me want to read what happened next real bad.
Dare we expect a follow-up?
-Griever
When tact is required, use brute force. When force is required, use greater force.
When the greatest force is required, use your head. Surprise is everything. - The Book of Cataclysm