Quote:Another interesting idea hobbled by a barely-literate author. And at 15 chapters, I had hopes that it was actually finished, since the story was interesting enough to keep me going despite the techical weakness. Silly me. It's not, and worse yet, it appears to end right before the climax. Since it hasn't been updated in 9 months -- and all 15 chapters were written in the 8 months prior -- I suspect this story is well and truly dead.
'Chains forged in fire'
-- Bob
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It's a "magical" land. I think "magical" is ancient Greek for "pain in the butt". -- Bun-Bun, Sluggy Freelance, 11/9/03