I just started the third part of this story before crashing last night, and I have to say, I'm really, really enjoying it. Well-written, by someone with good technical skill, good story-telling skill, and the ability to craft a believable "time traveler trying to change things" story that doesn't render its hero useless due to predestination or give him godlike omniscience because of his future knowledge. If the ending is worthy of the build-up, this will be a hell of a fic, and will go in my permanent favorites pile -- as well as get queued to read to Peggy.
-- Bob
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It's a "magical" land. I think "magical" is ancient Greek for "pain in the butt". -- Bun-Bun, Sluggy Freelance, 11/9/03
-- Bob
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It's a "magical" land. I think "magical" is ancient Greek for "pain in the butt". -- Bun-Bun, Sluggy Freelance, 11/9/03