Nice.
Some very small typo's friend ( instead of freind in 1st chapter)
http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/153627
chapter 4
Scoeling, Gomaru growled,
"wwarehouse with a light fog. The spreading fires made it swirl erratically and gave the scene a stran ge, shifting glow"
Some very small typo's friend ( instead of freind in 1st chapter)
http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/153627
chapter 4
Scoeling, Gomaru growled,
"wwarehouse with a light fog. The spreading fires made it swirl erratically and gave the scene a stran ge, shifting glow"