I don't have a problem with sexiness in my stories. I used to, but I grew up.
And I dind't call it softcore, I called it borderline softcore. It doens't have any actual nudity, so its not actually softcore porn.
My problem is that every single woman in every single one of Ozzalos's stories is the kind fo woman who does the sexy strut and it is always decsribed
the same way. It stopped being a story quirk and became a fetish. If every single story he wrote contained BDSM I would say that annoyed me. It's like when
i was reading The Wheel of Time and realised that every single woman got a spanking at some point (no matter how little this made sense). I don't
mind spanking, I don't mind BDSM, I don't mind the Sexy Strut. I just don't want to see it over and over and over again.
Go ahead and write a story where Ranma does the Sexy Strut. I've actually read (and enjoyed) quite a few stories about that kind of stuff. But it just
comes across as so forced and blatent in Ozzalos' work. Like I said, it really is beginning to feel like I'm reading Ozzalos' fetishes. not his
stories. And just like with the Wheel of Time, once I felt that way I can't really go back.
Though I suppose its my fault. I shoud go to the library more instead of looking for free fanfic on the internet all the time,
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Epsilon
And I dind't call it softcore, I called it borderline softcore. It doens't have any actual nudity, so its not actually softcore porn.
My problem is that every single woman in every single one of Ozzalos's stories is the kind fo woman who does the sexy strut and it is always decsribed
the same way. It stopped being a story quirk and became a fetish. If every single story he wrote contained BDSM I would say that annoyed me. It's like when
i was reading The Wheel of Time and realised that every single woman got a spanking at some point (no matter how little this made sense). I don't
mind spanking, I don't mind BDSM, I don't mind the Sexy Strut. I just don't want to see it over and over and over again.
Go ahead and write a story where Ranma does the Sexy Strut. I've actually read (and enjoyed) quite a few stories about that kind of stuff. But it just
comes across as so forced and blatent in Ozzalos' work. Like I said, it really is beginning to feel like I'm reading Ozzalos' fetishes. not his
stories. And just like with the Wheel of Time, once I felt that way I can't really go back.
Though I suppose its my fault. I shoud go to the library more instead of looking for free fanfic on the internet all the time,
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Epsilon