Quote:I've been reading this on and off over the past couple days. The guy needs a good refresher course in English composition, and he admits he's writing without a long-term plot in mind, but... it's not bad. A little too much tell and not enough show in parts, and of course he suffers from the standard set of Fanfic author homophone/spelling errors, but there's enough interesting there to keep me reading, even though I know nothing about SG-1.
Harry Potter and the StarGate
-- Bob
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It's a "magical" land. I think "magical" is ancient Greek for "pain in the butt". -- Bun-Bun, Sluggy Freelance, 11/9/03