Dead Bang random thought

[katreus]

Dude. Tis awesome.

Okay, I think you need to do a quick run through for some spelling errors, some repetitive words, and some parts where it felt awkward or a bit confusing. That
was mainly the area with those boomer spiders that had a mind imprinted on them were talking. There's also one part in the group meeting where Sylia is
saying something to Sylvie, but it's confusing because you don't - or at least I didn't - really have any idea who was speaking until a couple
lines down after the actual saying. I was confused as to whether it was Sylvia or Linna speaking.

As for Linna, I'm glad to see her growing and becoming a force in her own right. Actually, I'm really impressed with all the character growth from
Priss to Sylvia to Lisa and whoever. I think that's one of your biggest strengths in this story.

I really liked the scene with Motoko, Lisa, and the Magic Power song.

Hrm. I'm wagering a guess that Tony's shenanigans are unknown to his colleagues at IDEC. I'm wondering if he's related to the Ai group, but
doesn't seem like it.