I'm in chapter 14. The beginning is a little slow going, I'll agree. The author is, as far as I can tell, apparently not a native speaker of English, and definitely needs a basic creative writing course or at least a better grasp of how to tell a story engagingly, but the plot itself isn't bad, and once Harry gets to Hogwarts it gets really interesting. As far as Uber!Harry goes, this is a relatively mild one, and a fweird one at that, but so far it's working pretty well.
-- Bob
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It's a "magical" land. I think "magical" is ancient Greek for "pain in the butt". -- Bun-Bun, Sluggy Freelance, 11/9/03
-- Bob
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It's a "magical" land. I think "magical" is ancient Greek for "pain in the butt". -- Bun-Bun, Sluggy Freelance, 11/9/03