Quote:After reading a little more than three chapters of this last night, I find that I'm leaning toward agreeing with Chris. It is crude and pretty badly done. Despite this I am currently still reading it. The technical skill may be lacking but am I curious about what happens next, and so far nothing in the plot, such as it is, has made me close the window in disgust. Then again, as I noted above, I am only three chapters in. It could easily get worse.
A Second Chance at Life
-- Bob
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It's a "magical" land. I think "magical" is ancient Greek for "pain in the butt". -- Bun-Bun, Sluggy Freelance, 11/9/03