It looks great. The action is engaging and the flashbacks aren't too jarring. The dialogue has a nicely witty edge to it as well, which is always a nice
plus.
As for seeming weak... Meh. It does come off so, but not in a really bad way. Just more like what you said - the scene simply petered out. Not all scenes need
to end in something grand or flashy. You're always going to have stuff like this. As long as you keep things engaging, it won't matter at all.
plus.
As for seeming weak... Meh. It does come off so, but not in a really bad way. Just more like what you said - the scene simply petered out. Not all scenes need
to end in something grand or flashy. You're always going to have stuff like this. As long as you keep things engaging, it won't matter at all.