Yeah, I would say that this is, perhaps, the first quarter or so of the first chapter at most. I've got this bad habit of just letting the story tell
itself without a huge plan as to exactly what happens when and where or how I'll say it until.. well.. when I say it.
I've got some more written there, but the transition between Flashback and Present felt a little clumsy and I might add another scene or two between them.
If I were to draw a parallel, it's kind of like one of those martial arts movies with the training montage at the start that helps explain out Our Hero got
into the mess that they've gotten themselves into.
- Grumpy Uncle Gearhead
itself without a huge plan as to exactly what happens when and where or how I'll say it until.. well.. when I say it.
I've got some more written there, but the transition between Flashback and Present felt a little clumsy and I might add another scene or two between them.
If I were to draw a parallel, it's kind of like one of those martial arts movies with the training montage at the start that helps explain out Our Hero got
into the mess that they've gotten themselves into.
- Grumpy Uncle Gearhead