You may run into an issue with pacing. Are you making the 'group' come together fast, and having a whole bunch of adventures together? Or is it
going to be slower, with each girl getting her own segment of time? From what you've said so far, I'm thinking the latter.
I kinda wonder about the details involved for the Contenders--how fast will Rei get attached to Our Hero, how will Lum treat a non-lecherous 'husband',
how does Teletha leave her ship? and so on.
Of course, it'll be more fun reading it!
going to be slower, with each girl getting her own segment of time? From what you've said so far, I'm thinking the latter.
I kinda wonder about the details involved for the Contenders--how fast will Rei get attached to Our Hero, how will Lum treat a non-lecherous 'husband',
how does Teletha leave her ship? and so on.
Of course, it'll be more fun reading it!