Don't worry about not taking one of my ideas, either at all or at least as written; not only does actually working out why a particular bit will or
won't fit help things in the long run... but it gives us a clearer idea of how your mind/story intentions work. Yes, I realize that I put out complex
and random idea that are relatively large compared to other's contributions... but half of that is just getting the idea out of my head.
Ah, didn't know you hadn't seen the last episode... lets just say that it contains one of the best uses of a subtitle Chekhov's gun that I've
personally seen in a long time... also, its worse that that particular gun was bugging me for reasons I couldn't really voice early on.... on the other
hand my brother just thought it was funny I had that bizarre issue.
Edit: Also as Jerry will probably be mentioned in passing in this it may be a good idea to Not make him a Whispered. Eventually someone will check on him an
the idea he is just, as a friend of mine use to put it, "Good like that.' Few things do more to destabilize peoples Status Quo like randomly dropping
in unrelated variables that seem to fit... also gives you the option to have Zeke try things out he reads about on some random board he goes to... or let him
work out the bugs in a design/use a preexisting principle rather than make it from scratch... or maybe him figuring out the jacket trick (with technomage
skills no less) gets him access to such a board. Just a thought on how to speed up development and keep him from wasting to much time reinventing the wheel.
won't fit help things in the long run... but it gives us a clearer idea of how your mind/story intentions work. Yes, I realize that I put out complex
and random idea that are relatively large compared to other's contributions... but half of that is just getting the idea out of my head.
Ah, didn't know you hadn't seen the last episode... lets just say that it contains one of the best uses of a subtitle Chekhov's gun that I've
personally seen in a long time... also, its worse that that particular gun was bugging me for reasons I couldn't really voice early on.... on the other
hand my brother just thought it was funny I had that bizarre issue.
Edit: Also as Jerry will probably be mentioned in passing in this it may be a good idea to Not make him a Whispered. Eventually someone will check on him an
the idea he is just, as a friend of mine use to put it, "Good like that.' Few things do more to destabilize peoples Status Quo like randomly dropping
in unrelated variables that seem to fit... also gives you the option to have Zeke try things out he reads about on some random board he goes to... or let him
work out the bugs in a design/use a preexisting principle rather than make it from scratch... or maybe him figuring out the jacket trick (with technomage
skills no less) gets him access to such a board. Just a thought on how to speed up development and keep him from wasting to much time reinventing the wheel.