Quote:I like the style. For me, at least, it gives the story a strangely surreal quality, lending it multiple layers that all converge at the end.
The Weakest Link and Midnight Pirouette are both really well written stories, but that erratic timeflow style he uses is really annoying.
Quote:Meh, different strokes. I happen to like sad and tragic stories, The Bitter End is still one of my favorites. And I read that one as well at one or two in the morning.
To my further chagrin both are melencholy and I read them in the wee hours of the night (thus forcing me to stay up an extra couple hours finding something else to read in order to wash the gloomy taste out)
If you would like something far more upbeat, though still quite surreal, check out +Gradient's other story The Bequeathers, which is an interesting fic about Rei.*********
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