One thing I found jarring is that you used a couple of names well-known (to say the least) in the Honorverse -- Manticore and the Solarian League -- but the
technology and the date tell me plainly this isn't an Honorverse 'fic.
The situation on Ragol sounds fishy. In less than fourteen years, a perfectly nice planet turns into a Death World? I find myself thinking about what sorts of
shady things some of those Mega-corps might do to try to get their hands on the famed Coralian (Ragolian, now) technology. Bio-engineering monsters, perhaps,
whether to force the Ragolians to come up with new
über-weapons or to weaken them for a takeover....
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Big Brother is watching you. And damn, you are so bloody BORING.
technology and the date tell me plainly this isn't an Honorverse 'fic.
The situation on Ragol sounds fishy. In less than fourteen years, a perfectly nice planet turns into a Death World? I find myself thinking about what sorts of
shady things some of those Mega-corps might do to try to get their hands on the famed Coralian (Ragolian, now) technology. Bio-engineering monsters, perhaps,
whether to force the Ragolians to come up with new
über-weapons or to weaken them for a takeover....
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Big Brother is watching you. And damn, you are so bloody BORING.