[Fanfic, RFC] Dear, Sweet Kami-sama, Why Do You Hate Me So?
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[Fanfic, RFC] Dear, Sweet Kami-sama, Why Do You Hate Me So?
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One thing you may want to explore is how/why he scares girls away, and how the Contenders are different from this. I think you may be asking too much of the
audience otherwise. (At least, as far as your first draft goes, Zeke came off as rather charming for an iconoclast--but maybe I'm just ill-informed) |
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[Fanfic, RFC] Dear, Sweet Kami-sama, Why Do You Hate Me So? - by Black Aeronaut - 06-06-2009, 01:40 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 06-06-2009, 02:14 PM
[No subject] - by CattyNebulart - 06-06-2009, 02:48 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-06-2009, 05:50 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-06-2009, 08:11 PM
[No subject] - by CattyNebulart - 06-07-2009, 03:11 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-07-2009, 08:35 AM
[No subject] - by CattyNebulart - 06-07-2009, 12:26 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 06-07-2009, 04:20 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-07-2009, 04:59 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 06-08-2009, 02:02 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-08-2009, 02:47 PM
[No subject] - by paladindythe - 06-10-2009, 05:32 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-10-2009, 10:33 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 06-11-2009, 04:24 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-11-2009, 04:55 PM
[No subject] - by paladindythe - 06-11-2009, 05:38 PM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 06-11-2009, 07:28 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-13-2009, 04:47 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 06-13-2009, 03:50 PM
[No subject] - by Evil Midnight Lurker - 06-13-2009, 09:04 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-14-2009, 12:38 AM
[No subject] - by ordnance11 - 06-14-2009, 07:26 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-15-2009, 03:42 AM
[No subject] - by ordnance11 - 06-15-2009, 08:02 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-15-2009, 11:46 AM
Tidbit! - by Black Aeronaut - 06-15-2009, 02:57 PM
[No subject] - by Valles - 06-15-2009, 03:09 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-16-2009, 08:09 AM
[No subject] - by paladindythe - 06-17-2009, 02:38 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-17-2009, 09:44 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 06-17-2009, 10:31 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-17-2009, 12:10 PM
[No subject] - by Evil Midnight Lurker - 06-17-2009, 05:29 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-17-2009, 07:04 PM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 06-17-2009, 10:54 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-18-2009, 01:47 AM
[No subject] - by Evil Midnight Lurker - 06-18-2009, 03:51 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 06-19-2009, 03:30 AM
[No subject] - by Evil Midnight Lurker - 06-19-2009, 08:28 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-19-2009, 03:38 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 06-19-2009, 09:53 PM
[No subject] - by Valles - 06-19-2009, 11:48 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 06-20-2009, 03:20 AM
[No subject] - by Valles - 06-20-2009, 03:39 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-20-2009, 05:32 AM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 06-20-2009, 01:41 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-20-2009, 01:59 PM
[No subject] - by Bob Schroeck - 06-20-2009, 02:51 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 06-20-2009, 07:46 PM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 06-20-2009, 07:53 PM
[No subject] - by Guilherme Loureiro - 06-20-2009, 10:39 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-21-2009, 08:07 AM
[No subject] - by Evil Midnight Lurker - 06-21-2009, 09:59 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-21-2009, 04:16 PM
[No subject] - by Evil Midnight Lurker - 06-21-2009, 05:33 PM
[No subject] - by Valles - 06-21-2009, 06:48 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-21-2009, 06:55 PM
[No subject] - by Evil Midnight Lurker - 06-21-2009, 07:29 PM
[No subject] - by ECSNorway - 06-21-2009, 10:01 PM
[No subject] - by ordnance11 - 06-22-2009, 12:46 AM
[No subject] - by Evil Midnight Lurker - 06-22-2009, 01:32 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-22-2009, 08:50 AM
[No subject] - by Evil Midnight Lurker - 06-22-2009, 09:30 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-22-2009, 10:52 AM
[No subject] - by Necratoid - 06-22-2009, 10:50 PM
[No subject] - by paladindythe - 06-23-2009, 12:08 AM
[No subject] - by robkelk - 06-23-2009, 01:59 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-23-2009, 05:38 AM
[No subject] - by Drenivian - 06-23-2009, 02:17 PM
[No subject] - by Epsilon - 06-23-2009, 03:58 PM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 06-24-2009, 01:39 PM
Just noticed something about your cast list - by robkelk - 06-30-2009, 05:08 AM
[No subject] - by Black Aeronaut - 07-01-2009, 01:49 AM
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