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[Fanfic, RFC] Dear, Sweet Kami-sama, Why Do You Hate Me So?
 
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Yeah, I'm not opposed to him actually being able to take down Thug number 3 or anything... its just with the the rest of the skill base listed (and the
general smarminess didn't help the view) him adding in he practiced martial arts sets off the SI alarms. Granted he might not actually understand the
local standards for calling ones self a martial artist. So I'd leave i out of his intro... bringing it up that he wants to learn some kendo, images of an
enchantent stick sword dancing through his brain, after seeing some of the random acts of monster vs. magical girl violence or seeing some of the random
battles between empowered characters and youma, or mercenaries or something. Its not that he knows some self defense and prudencee and self preservation make
him want to expand on that that is the issue I had. Its weaning you away from the SI being presented as an image thing.
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