I have to agree with paladindythe. Your cast list and proto-plot are already pretty hefty.
From here on in, whenever you come up with a Cool Idea, ask yourself "Does this add anything to the story that can't be done with what I've already got?" If it does, then put it in. Otherwise, put the idea in a folder marked "cool ideas" and forget about it for now. (That way, when D,SKS,WDYHMS? is finished, you have something for your next fic...)
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Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012
From here on in, whenever you come up with a Cool Idea, ask yourself "Does this add anything to the story that can't be done with what I've already got?" If it does, then put it in. Otherwise, put the idea in a folder marked "cool ideas" and forget about it for now. (That way, when D,SKS,WDYHMS? is finished, you have something for your next fic...)
--
Rob Kelk
"Governments have no right to question the loyalty of those who oppose
them. Adversaries remain citizens of the same state, common subjects of
the same sovereign, servants of the same law."
- Michael Ignatieff, addressing Stanford University in 2012